General Poetry posted December 31, 2024


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Exploring the quiet devastation of losing oneself.

What's Left of Her

by Ria Lunafik

A woman weeps red,

Her ashes locked in an urn,

A spectre remains.




5-7-5 Poetry Contest contest entry


The poem explores the loss of self, reflecting on the little that is left of her when she has been stripped of vitality and is left simply existing.
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