Horror and Thriller Fiction posted January 8, 2025 | Chapters: | 1 2 -3- |
A war of the few against a syndicate
A chapter in the book Burn It All Down
The Game Tightens
by marilyn quillen
The author has placed a warning on this post for violence.
Background Alex Dane and Ethan GraysonâÂÂonce hunter and preyâÂÂare now forced to join forces. Together, they lead a battle-hardened team of operatives against the Syndicate, a shadow organization bent on |
The Game Tightens
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The light of dawn filtered weakly through the trees, bathing the forest in a cold, gray glow. Alex crouched in the snow, studying the tracks Grayson had left behind. They weren't random each footprint, each turn, each doubled-back trail was calculated. Deliberate.
The words etched into the snow in the center of his camp "Stay ahead, Dane" burned into his mind. Grayson wasn't just leading him in circles; he was toying with him. Mocking him.
Alex's gloved fingers brushed the edge of one footprint, noting the faintest shift in the snow where it pressed deeper. Grayson had been here recently, close enough to leave a mark in the freshly fallen snow.
Too close.
Alex straightened, his rifle slung low across his chest, and scanned the tree line. The forest was silent but alive in its stillness. Every shadow seemed to breathe, every branch bending under the weight of snow felt like a set of eyes watching. He wasn't alone out here not anymore.
The New Trail
The next set of tracks veered west, deeper into the thick of the forest. Alex followed cautiously, his boots crunching softly in the snow. The cold was sharp, biting into his skin despite his layers. It had been years since he'd felt this kind of tension the raw, electric charge of a hunt where the prey might be smarter than the hunter.
The first trap came an hour into the trail. A crude snare, the wire barely visible against the snow, was rigged to a bent sapling. If triggered, it would've whipped up with enough force to shatter bone.
Alex crouched beside it, studying the mechanism. It was simple but effective, the kind of trap designed to incapacitate rather than kill. He disarmed it carefully, his movements quick and precise, then glanced around for signs of another.
Grayson wasn't relying on one trap.
A faint shift in the snow ahead caught Alex's attention a patch too smooth, too untouched. He circled wide, his boots pressing firm into the frozen ground, and spotted the second trap. This one was more complex: a tripwire leading to a buried charge, the detonator hidden beneath a thin layer of snow.
Alex's breath fogged the air as he crouched to inspect it. Grayson had gone to great lengths to make this look natural. The wire was fine, nearly invisible unless you knew what to look for, and the placement was flawless. Alex traced its path to a nearby tree, where a small bundle of explosives was rigged to spray shrapnel in every direction.
He disarmed the charge with steady hands, his pulse calm but steady. He'd seen traps like this before back when he was on the other side of the game.
"You're thorough," Alex muttered under his breath, his voice lost in the cold air.
He stood, scanning the area. Grayson was close too close for comfort but the lack of sound, the lack of movement, unnerved him more than any trap.
Signs of Life
By mid-afternoon, Alex had reached a clearing. The snow was deeper here, untouched except for a faint set of tracks leading to a rocky overhang. Smoke curled weakly from somewhere beyond the rise, a thin, pale thread against the gray sky.
Alex's instincts screamed at him to stop. This was wrong too open, too exposed. But the trail was leading him here, and he wasn't about to back off now.
He moved cautiously, his rifle raised, and climbed the slope. As he crested the ridge, the source of the smoke came into view: a fire pit, small and controlled, nestled against the base of the rocks. A metal pot hung over the flames, steam curling from its spout.
No one was there.
Alex approached slowly, his boots crunching in the snow. The fire was real, the heat warm against his face, but the area was too clean. No gear. No supplies. Just the fire and the pot.
He crouched beside the flames, glancing into the pot. Water, still boiling. Whoever had been here was close, minutes away, maybe less.
A sound behind him a faint snap of a branch.
Alex spun, his rifle snapping to his shoulder, but the clearing was empty. His heart pounded as he scanned the tree line, the snow falling in thick, heavy flakes.
Then he saw it.
A figure, barely visible through the trees, standing motionless at the edge of the clearing. Grayson.
Alex froze, his finger hovering over the trigger. The figure didn't move, didn't react. It was like staring at a shadow that had come to life.
"Grayson," Alex called out, his voice steady. "You've got nowhere to go."
The figure tilted its head, just slightly, then turned and vanished into the forest.
Alex didn't hesitate. He followed.
Into the Darkness
The forest swallowed him whole, the trees growing denser, their branches clawing at the sky. Grayson's trail was easy to follow at first fresh prints pressed deep into the snow but it became erratic the further Alex went. The tracks doubled back, circled, then vanished entirely before reappearing yards away.
The light faded quickly, and Alex slowed, his nerves on edge. The silence was crushing now, broken only by the soft crunch of his boots and the faint whisper of the wind.
He paused, kneeling in the snow, and scanned the area. Something wasn't right. Grayson wasn't running, he was leading.
Alex adjusted the grip on his rifle, his breath fogging in the cold air. "Come on," he muttered, his voice low. "Let's end this."
A sudden movementâÂ"a flash of something in the corner of his eye. Alex turned sharply, his finger brushing the trigger, but the forest was empty.
No. Not empty.
A faint light glowed through the trees ahead, flickering like a fire. Alex moved toward it, his boots crunching softly in the snow. The light grew brighter, casting long shadows that danced against the trunks of the trees.
As he approached, the source of the light came into view: a lantern, hanging from a low branch, swaying gently in the wind. Beneath it, a piece of paper was nailed to the tree.
Alex tore it down, his gloved fingers brushing the words scrawled across the page:
"Not bad, Dane. But the night's just getting started."
A low, sharp snap sounded behind him.
Alex turned, and the forest exploded into chaos.
________________________________________
The light of dawn filtered weakly through the trees, bathing the forest in a cold, gray glow. Alex crouched in the snow, studying the tracks Grayson had left behind. They weren't random each footprint, each turn, each doubled-back trail was calculated. Deliberate.
The words etched into the snow in the center of his camp "Stay ahead, Dane" burned into his mind. Grayson wasn't just leading him in circles; he was toying with him. Mocking him.
Alex's gloved fingers brushed the edge of one footprint, noting the faintest shift in the snow where it pressed deeper. Grayson had been here recently, close enough to leave a mark in the freshly fallen snow.
Too close.
Alex straightened, his rifle slung low across his chest, and scanned the tree line. The forest was silent but alive in its stillness. Every shadow seemed to breathe, every branch bending under the weight of snow felt like a set of eyes watching. He wasn't alone out here not anymore.
The New Trail
The next set of tracks veered west, deeper into the thick of the forest. Alex followed cautiously, his boots crunching softly in the snow. The cold was sharp, biting into his skin despite his layers. It had been years since he'd felt this kind of tension the raw, electric charge of a hunt where the prey might be smarter than the hunter.
The first trap came an hour into the trail. A crude snare, the wire barely visible against the snow, was rigged to a bent sapling. If triggered, it would've whipped up with enough force to shatter bone.
Alex crouched beside it, studying the mechanism. It was simple but effective, the kind of trap designed to incapacitate rather than kill. He disarmed it carefully, his movements quick and precise, then glanced around for signs of another.
Grayson wasn't relying on one trap.
A faint shift in the snow ahead caught Alex's attention a patch too smooth, too untouched. He circled wide, his boots pressing firm into the frozen ground, and spotted the second trap. This one was more complex: a tripwire leading to a buried charge, the detonator hidden beneath a thin layer of snow.
Alex's breath fogged the air as he crouched to inspect it. Grayson had gone to great lengths to make this look natural. The wire was fine, nearly invisible unless you knew what to look for, and the placement was flawless. Alex traced its path to a nearby tree, where a small bundle of explosives was rigged to spray shrapnel in every direction.
He disarmed the charge with steady hands, his pulse calm but steady. He'd seen traps like this before back when he was on the other side of the game.
"You're thorough," Alex muttered under his breath, his voice lost in the cold air.
He stood, scanning the area. Grayson was close too close for comfort but the lack of sound, the lack of movement, unnerved him more than any trap.
Signs of Life
By mid-afternoon, Alex had reached a clearing. The snow was deeper here, untouched except for a faint set of tracks leading to a rocky overhang. Smoke curled weakly from somewhere beyond the rise, a thin, pale thread against the gray sky.
Alex's instincts screamed at him to stop. This was wrong too open, too exposed. But the trail was leading him here, and he wasn't about to back off now.
He moved cautiously, his rifle raised, and climbed the slope. As he crested the ridge, the source of the smoke came into view: a fire pit, small and controlled, nestled against the base of the rocks. A metal pot hung over the flames, steam curling from its spout.
No one was there.
Alex approached slowly, his boots crunching in the snow. The fire was real, the heat warm against his face, but the area was too clean. No gear. No supplies. Just the fire and the pot.
He crouched beside the flames, glancing into the pot. Water, still boiling. Whoever had been here was close, minutes away, maybe less.
A sound behind him a faint snap of a branch.
Alex spun, his rifle snapping to his shoulder, but the clearing was empty. His heart pounded as he scanned the tree line, the snow falling in thick, heavy flakes.
Then he saw it.
A figure, barely visible through the trees, standing motionless at the edge of the clearing. Grayson.
Alex froze, his finger hovering over the trigger. The figure didn't move, didn't react. It was like staring at a shadow that had come to life.
"Grayson," Alex called out, his voice steady. "You've got nowhere to go."
The figure tilted its head, just slightly, then turned and vanished into the forest.
Alex didn't hesitate. He followed.
Into the Darkness
The forest swallowed him whole, the trees growing denser, their branches clawing at the sky. Grayson's trail was easy to follow at first fresh prints pressed deep into the snow but it became erratic the further Alex went. The tracks doubled back, circled, then vanished entirely before reappearing yards away.
The light faded quickly, and Alex slowed, his nerves on edge. The silence was crushing now, broken only by the soft crunch of his boots and the faint whisper of the wind.
He paused, kneeling in the snow, and scanned the area. Something wasn't right. Grayson wasn't running, he was leading.
Alex adjusted the grip on his rifle, his breath fogging in the cold air. "Come on," he muttered, his voice low. "Let's end this."
A sudden movementâÂ"a flash of something in the corner of his eye. Alex turned sharply, his finger brushing the trigger, but the forest was empty.
No. Not empty.
A faint light glowed through the trees ahead, flickering like a fire. Alex moved toward it, his boots crunching softly in the snow. The light grew brighter, casting long shadows that danced against the trunks of the trees.
As he approached, the source of the light came into view: a lantern, hanging from a low branch, swaying gently in the wind. Beneath it, a piece of paper was nailed to the tree.
Alex tore it down, his gloved fingers brushing the words scrawled across the page:
"Not bad, Dane. But the night's just getting started."
A low, sharp snap sounded behind him.
Alex turned, and the forest exploded into chaos.
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