Horror and Thriller Fiction posted January 10, 2025 Chapters: 2 3 -5- 6 


A war of the few against a syndicate
A chapter in the book Burn It All Down

The Circle Tightens

by marilyn quillen




Background
Alex Dane and Ethan Grayson—once hunter and prey—are now forced to join forces. Together, they lead a battle-hardened team of operatives against the Syndicate, a shadow organization bent on
The forest was a frozen labyrinth, every step sinking Alex deeper into the trap. He stood in the clearing, the crumpled note burning in his pocket like a live coal. Grayson's words"How far will you go before you realize who's really pulling the strings?" echoed in his head, clawing at the edges of his composure.
Alex scanned the tree line, the rifle steady in his hands. The clearing was too exposed, too perfect. He could feel Grayson watching him, the man's presence a suffocating weight pressing against his chest.
"Come on," Alex muttered under his breath, his voice low and sharp. "Let's end this."
Nothing. Just the soft whisper of the wind through the pines and the distant creak of snow-laden branches.
Alex forced himself to move, every instinct screaming at him to get out of the open. He followed the faint indentation of a trail leading away from the clearing, his boots crunching softly in the snow. The trees closed in quickly, the shadows deepening as the light faded.

A Familiar Pattern

The trail was maddeningly familiar. Alex realized with a sinking feeling that he'd been here before. The same twisted pine leaning precariously over the path, the same jagged boulder half-buried in the snow. Grayson was leading him in circles.

Alex stopped, his breath fogging in the cold air, and crouched to examine the tracks. They were his own.

"Damn it," he growled, rising to his feet. He turned sharply, scanning the surrounding trees. "You're wasting my time, Grayson!"

The forest absorbed his shout, the sound swallowed by the oppressive silence.
Then, faintly, a sound. A soft whistle, lilting and calm. It came from deeper in the forest, a haunting melody that cut through the stillness like a blade.

Alex's grip on the rifle tightened. The whistle continued, its source impossible to pinpoint. It wasn't taunting it was inviting.

The trail led toward the sound, the path narrowing between tightly packed trees. Alex followed cautiously, the whistle growing louder, more distinct, until he could almost make out its rhythm. It was familiar something from his past, though he couldn't place it.
The sound stopped abruptly, replaced by a deafening silence.

And then the forest exploded.

The Ambush

The first shot came from his left, striking the tree inches from his head and sending bark flying into his face. Alex dropped instinctively, rolling into the snow and bringing his rifle up as a second shot cracked through the air.

Grayson wasn't firing to kill not yet.

Alex scanned the tree line, his heart hammering. The snow muffled everything, turning the forest into a maze of distorted sounds. He couldn't see the shooter, but he could feel the man's presence pressing in from every direction.

Another shot rang out, this one closer, driving Alex into a low crawl toward the cover of a fallen log. He pressed his back against it, his breath coming in sharp bursts, and strained his ears for any sign of movement.

The silence stretched, heavy and suffocating.

And then, faintly, Grayson's voice: "You're predictable, Dane."

Alex turned sharply, his rifle snapping toward the sound, but there was no one there.
Another shot, this one from his right, splintering the log beside his head. Grayson was moving, circling, always one step ahead.

Alex rolled out of cover and fired blindly into the trees, the crack of his rifle echoing through the forest. The recoil jolted through his shoulder, but there was no response, no sound of a body hitting the snow.

Just silence.

The False Trail

Alex moved again, keeping low as he retreated deeper into the forest. His breaths came fast and shallow, his mind racing. Grayson wasn't just toying with him he was driving him.

Herding him.

But toward what?

The snow fell heavier now, the flakes thick and blinding. Alex's boots slipped on a patch of ice, sending him sprawling into the cold. He scrambled to his feet, his pulse pounding, and froze.

In the snow ahead, another set of tracks. Fresh.

Grayson's.

Alex followed, his steps quickening despite the cold biting at his face and the ache in his shoulder. The tracks led to a narrow gap between two towering boulders, the space barely wide enough for him to fit through.

It was too perfect.

Alex hesitated, his rifle raised as he scanned the area. The boulders loomed over him like jagged teeth, the shadows between them unnaturally deep.

Grayson wouldn't make it this easy.

Alex circled the gap, staying low as he examined the surrounding snow. His eyes caught it immediately a faint line etched across the ground, too straight to be natural.

Another trap.

He crouched, brushing the snow aside to reveal a wire stretched taut between two stakes. Following its path, he found the detonator buried beneath a nearby rock. The charge was small but effective, designed to send shards of shrapnel in every direction.

Alex disarmed it quickly, his fingers steady despite the cold. As he straightened, a faint sound behind him sent a jolt through his chest a single step, deliberate and close.

He turned sharply, his rifle snapping to his shoulder, but the trail was empty.

Then he heard it again: the whistle. Closer now, almost playful.

The Confrontation

Alex didn't wait. He bolted through the gap between the boulders, his rifle raised and ready. The trail opened into another clearing, this one smaller and more enclosed, the trees forming a jagged ring around its edges.

At the center stood Grayson.

The man's posture was relaxed, his rifle slung casually over one shoulder. Snow clung to his dark jacket, his face shadowed beneath the brim of a hood.

"You're persistent," Grayson said, his tone calm. "I'll give you that."

Alex leveled his rifle, his jaw tightening. "You're done running."

Grayson smirked faintly, stepping closer. "Running? Is that what you think this is?"

Alex didn't lower the weapon. "You've been leading me in circles, laying traps, playing games. It ends now."

"Does it?" Grayson asked, his voice low. "Tell me something, Dane. Do you even know why you're here?"

Alex hesitated, his finger brushing the trigger. "To bring you in."

Grayson's smirk widened. "They told you that, didn't they? Told you I was dangerous. That I needed to be stopped."

"You killed people," Alex growled.

Grayson shook his head. "I survived. And you're not here to stop me. You're here because they sent you. Same as they sent me."

Alex's grip tightened on the rifle, his heart hammering. "What are you talking about?"

Grayson took another step closer, his voice dropping. "You're not the hunter, Dane. You're the bait."

The words hit Alex like a blow, freezing him in place.

And then, from the shadows, came the sound of footsteps.

Not Grayson's.




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