Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 6, 2015 Chapters:  ...43 44 -51- 52... 


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A chapter in the book Act Of Endurance

A Tear

by TPAC

Words out a box hit my heart its harsh tone note its thrust touch;
awaits in one eye pox mud fox appears:
hear news echoing a pain reaction in me.

This tiny dot strip rape to form a flickering drop;
grew faster changing inside whole shape:
escape in hurt out eye wobble angers see a rock pile a mound.

I am indeed its maker of this tear evil schemes at bite not sole creator;
yell cry a baker:
sink faker on cheek a puddle.

Events laid in a life the shock firm in actuality free tear fact;
from me this horror with hell's rage pain impact:
realized act in fate of its cruel real intents believably lived direct connect.

Time up off cheek sent small tear call to depart chin down;
leap open air trip from left eye a bright gem:
likened shape a wall within twinkles dot.

A self entitled crown it strikes freed shear feeling in misery;
carries pave fear lined body every tear unrighteousness:
bursting splash found guilty.

This angry drip dropping zoom to lower floor traveling boom;
hit doom destroys a small dot splatters into pieces in parts:
rolled beads touching it things multiplying my pain.

Any felt tear brought from its dark pit exposed as a ball to go as it will free fall reflects a harm that carries;
giving you a call, stop by none:
answer sorrow.



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A tear rooted to each broken heart, responds to emotions convey honesty, immediately wet ball; flow of undeniable: water.
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