Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 48 "Chapter 28 B Willing Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Sorry, Barbra, my cataracts are so thick now I can only read a few at a time, and that's on very large print. I'm catching up with you today.
That was a grueling scene with poor Myra, I do hope Sami and Noah will be able to foster her, she will be in excellent hands if she can. Now I'm wondering if Noah is finally going to propose, that would be great. I'm off to read your next chapter. As you can see I'm not posting for a couple of weeks, I need to rest up for a while. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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Sorry, Barbra, my cataracts are so thick now I can only read a few at a time, and that's on very large print. I'm catching up with you today.
That was a grueling scene with poor Myra, I do hope Sami and Noah will be able to foster her, she will be in excellent hands if she can. Now I'm wondering if Noah is finally going to propose, that would be great. I'm off to read your next chapter. As you can see I'm not posting for a couple of weeks, I need to rest up for a while. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 23-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2024
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I'm praying for your recovery. Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Barbara,
Your story has taken some nice turns. Human trafficking is such a horrible world-wide travesty. It's good that you call attention to the victim's plight.
I wish you the very best with this novel and all your writing.
Your take on a social ill is excellent; and I love that you put a love story within its pages.
Merry Christmas, Barbara.
Cindy
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Barbara,
Your story has taken some nice turns. Human trafficking is such a horrible world-wide travesty. It's good that you call attention to the victim's plight.
I wish you the very best with this novel and all your writing.
Your take on a social ill is excellent; and I love that you put a love story within its pages.
Merry Christmas, Barbara.
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I like your dialogues. They are an interesting way to move the story along, for the reader.
One note:
"I guess you know Jesse was killed in Viet Nam."
Vietnam is one word.
Have a good day,
Alex
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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I like your dialogues. They are an interesting way to move the story along, for the reader.
One note:
"I guess you know Jesse was killed in Viet Nam."
Vietnam is one word.
Have a good day,
Alex
Comment Written 20-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2024
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You're right. I'm surprised some else didn't catch it. I appreciate the help.
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I'm glad it helped. You've certainly helped me before, too.
Merry Christmas to you and yours,
Alex :)
Comment from GWHARGIS
Thank you for not going into what and how they tortured Myra. My imagination is bad enough so I don't need help. I like that they got to meet Amber and hear her story. Definitely glad they saw Myra. Such a sad thing that this is really happening. Great story. Gretchen
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you for not going into what and how they tortured Myra. My imagination is bad enough so I don't need help. I like that they got to meet Amber and hear her story. Definitely glad they saw Myra. Such a sad thing that this is really happening. Great story. Gretchen
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you for understanding. To me what happened to Myra doesn't move the story along. We just need to know it happened.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Barbara,
I'm sorry I don't have another 6 for this sweet and moving chapter. We see in it that Myra had a really rough time of it in her captivity. I'm glad she made it out, but not untouched. That's sad, but I like the way Sammi and Noah are committed to helping her recover and have a home when she gets out.
Christmas Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Hi Barbara,
I'm sorry I don't have another 6 for this sweet and moving chapter. We see in it that Myra had a really rough time of it in her captivity. I'm glad she made it out, but not untouched. That's sad, but I like the way Sammi and Noah are committed to helping her recover and have a home when she gets out.
Christmas Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 18-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024
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Not a problem. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from eliz100
I am so glad I found you. When I finish here, I will be friends with you. This is an excellent chapter. There is one edit.
"He covered it (add with)his hand attempting to ignore it.
Have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I am so glad I found you. When I finish here, I will be friends with you. This is an excellent chapter. There is one edit.
"He covered it (add with)his hand attempting to ignore it.
Have a blessed day.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Thank you for giving me enough information I could find that mistake. Another reviewer mentioned it but I read over and over again, searching for it. I appreciate the help. THANK YOU!!!!
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Have you published any books since I was gone.
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Not sure. When did you leave? I have a total of 9 books published.
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Sorry 8 published books. I got ahead of myself.
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I have been off for almost a year.
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I've had 'Prayers Answered,' and maybe, 'Love for the Win', and 'Texas Enticement' published this year.
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Congratulations!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Myra has a long way ahead until she is well. Thankfully she has Sami and Noah on her side. She is lucky.
Well done, Barbara, another compelling chapter. It's nice to see Noah and sami's relationship. It's hard to believe they met a month ago. But when the right one comes along you know.
Gypsy
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Myra has a long way ahead until she is well. Thankfully she has Sami and Noah on her side. She is lucky.
Well done, Barbara, another compelling chapter. It's nice to see Noah and sami's relationship. It's hard to believe they met a month ago. But when the right one comes along you know.
Gypsy
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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When it's right, it's right. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
I enjoyed this chapter. I think I must have missed something along the way, I don't recall reading anything about Amber in previous posts. I liked the way this chapter moved along, passing from one character to the next, without being overwhelming.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Hello Barbara,
I enjoyed this chapter. I think I must have missed something along the way, I don't recall reading anything about Amber in previous posts. I liked the way this chapter moved along, passing from one character to the next, without being overwhelming.
Have a blessed evening gal.
Tom
Comment Written 17-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Sami found her letters in the puzzle box. She didn't actually show up until now. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Sami's strong character shows through as she wishes to become Myra's sponsor. Noah's promise to be there with Sami to help Myra may be really hard to realize. There are two problems: Pararaph 10 ends in quotes but you used third person. Noah's wrist comm . . . sentence has missing word.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Sami's strong character shows through as she wishes to become Myra's sponsor. Noah's promise to be there with Sami to help Myra may be really hard to realize. There are two problems: Pararaph 10 ends in quotes but you used third person. Noah's wrist comm . . . sentence has missing word.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I searched for these errors and couldn't find them. I will keep searching. Maybe somebody will comment on them with more information. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from lyenochka
Aww. Noah and Sami are going on dates and even have papers to adopt Myra. Wow, they're practically parents before marriage! That's so sweet.
One suggestion:
"Yes, Mateo carried you out, and I ensured both your safety as you left." Sami studied Noah as he" (I would put a speech tag about Noah because it's always jarring to me to see someone else's name after quote.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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Aww. Noah and Sami are going on dates and even have papers to adopt Myra. Wow, they're practically parents before marriage! That's so sweet.
One suggestion:
"Yes, Mateo carried you out, and I ensured both your safety as you left." Sami studied Noah as he" (I would put a speech tag about Noah because it's always jarring to me to see someone else's name after quote.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2024
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I'll see what I can do about that sentence. Maybe it needs a complete rewrite. Thank you for pointing it out.
