Willing Hearts
Viewing comments for Chapter 51 "Chapter 29 B Wiling Hearts"Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
While her door was fixed and into the rest of the day, they had another perfect date. His profession seems like it will always be a problem, but they need to get married soon to have the perfect life. They may spend the rest of their life together fighting off the bad guys, but at least they will be together.
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While her door was fixed and into the rest of the day, they had another perfect date. His profession seems like it will always be a problem, but they need to get married soon to have the perfect life. They may spend the rest of their life together fighting off the bad guys, but at least they will be together.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2025
Comment from forestport12
I got caught up reading the notes as my last thought. What sticks out is how your like a printing press that doesn't sleep. You're splitting a long chapter, almost finished and the next book is about to come flying out? Man, I'm jealous. You bring new meaning to the word, "prolific."
I so like your characters who are deeply defined over time through the dialogue that fills pages. A love story built around saving girls from trafficking, if I got that right. So respect the quality you create with quantity. I could never...
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I got caught up reading the notes as my last thought. What sticks out is how your like a printing press that doesn't sleep. You're splitting a long chapter, almost finished and the next book is about to come flying out? Man, I'm jealous. You bring new meaning to the word, "prolific."
I so like your characters who are deeply defined over time through the dialogue that fills pages. A love story built around saving girls from trafficking, if I got that right. So respect the quality you create with quantity. I could never...
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Barbara,
dolphins love to get in front of a boat and ride the wake. They are so much fun to watch, they seem to truly enjoy life.
I don't know how much longer Noah can restrain himself. After all, he's only human.
If it were me, I'd consider finding a different place to live, someplace that my life wasn't in constant danger, but that's just me. Well done gal.
Blessings,
Tom
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Hello Barbara,
dolphins love to get in front of a boat and ride the wake. They are so much fun to watch, they seem to truly enjoy life.
I don't know how much longer Noah can restrain himself. After all, he's only human.
If it were me, I'd consider finding a different place to live, someplace that my life wasn't in constant danger, but that's just me. Well done gal.
Blessings,
Tom
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Wendy G
A very romantic chapter, and it seems they are heading for a wedding in the near future. Hope so anyway. The writing was clear and informative, and the tendency of all of us to blame ourselves for things beyond our control was explored. Well done.
Wendy
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A very romantic chapter, and it seems they are heading for a wedding in the near future. Hope so anyway. The writing was clear and informative, and the tendency of all of us to blame ourselves for things beyond our control was explored. Well done.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from nomi338
Sami and Noah have a perfect seeming relationship. The natural thing for them now is to get married. My hope is that they would look also into the possibility of having children as well. I love this story and its characters very much.
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Sami and Noah have a perfect seeming relationship. The natural thing for them now is to get married. My hope is that they would look also into the possibility of having children as well. I love this story and its characters very much.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Things are getting pretty steamy for Noah and Sami, yet they are keeping it all innocent. I like the way you add in church and values into your chapters, yet have an interesting story as well.
I'm glad you reminded us of what happened with Ella, because I had forgotten. I knew the name sounded familiar, but...
Great story,
Hugs,
Rhonda
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Things are getting pretty steamy for Noah and Sami, yet they are keeping it all innocent. I like the way you add in church and values into your chapters, yet have an interesting story as well.
I'm glad you reminded us of what happened with Ella, because I had forgotten. I knew the name sounded familiar, but...
Great story,
Hugs,
Rhonda
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
Comment from Paul McFarland
This was a very nice post, Barb. No problems with the bad guys, and we are getting closer to where Sami and Noah are going to get together. Hopefully we will have wedding bells.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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This was a very nice post, Barb. No problems with the bad guys, and we are getting closer to where Sami and Noah are going to get together. Hopefully we will have wedding bells.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Tina Crute
I haven't read the earlier chapters, but I feel I've got the gist of things just from this intetesting chapter. I love the writing about the romance between Noah and Sami because it's so sweet and protective. If I was her I'd be stressed and worried and she's not. That's the only thing that stood out to me.
I'm no expert. I just love romance novels that aren't perfect.
This was so fun to read. Bravo on being almost done!
Tina
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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I haven't read the earlier chapters, but I feel I've got the gist of things just from this intetesting chapter. I love the writing about the romance between Noah and Sami because it's so sweet and protective. If I was her I'd be stressed and worried and she's not. That's the only thing that stood out to me.
I'm no expert. I just love romance novels that aren't perfect.
This was so fun to read. Bravo on being almost done!
Tina
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review. Sami has been through a lot up to this point. She's beginning to understand.
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Gotcha! I'm glad she's at a good point!
Great writing!
Comment from judiverse
Wow! You are moving right along, with another novel almost finished. Let's get Sami returned to her job and living a normal life. That sounds like a big security detail. She has already shown she can take care of threatening situations. Sounds like a wonderful trip to Galveston. I've been there a few times when we lived in Texas. It would have been fun to see the dolphins. In the line "I didn't say I was going too," I think you mean going to. Again, I think your main story was Sami in protective custody. All the side trips, etc. are nice but don't seem part of the plot. judi
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Wow! You are moving right along, with another novel almost finished. Let's get Sami returned to her job and living a normal life. That sounds like a big security detail. She has already shown she can take care of threatening situations. Sounds like a wonderful trip to Galveston. I've been there a few times when we lived in Texas. It would have been fun to see the dolphins. In the line "I didn't say I was going too," I think you mean going to. Again, I think your main story was Sami in protective custody. All the side trips, etc. are nice but don't seem part of the plot. judi
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind words and I'll check that area.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Barbara,
Another great chapter to your book. It's coming along nicely. Noah is such a gentleman for keeping his word to Sami's dad. They seem to have a great relationship, but I feel something is going to happen.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Barbara,
Another great chapter to your book. It's coming along nicely. Noah is such a gentleman for keeping his word to Sami's dad. They seem to have a great relationship, but I feel something is going to happen.
Cecilia
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome
