Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A lovely rhyming poem filled with hope. Great artwork and presentation to add to the message of hope. I enjoyed each line.

Very well done.
Blessing
Janet

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thank you for this great review...I always appreciate it. :)

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written rhyming and hopeful poem about finding the perfect lover and hope to make him happy enough and never want to leave again but stay to dwell together.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem of love, as well as hope. The image is one of joy. Your poem flows well, with the enthusiasm and joy of new love and all that that promises. Well done.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your nice comments. :)

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the video and the the title: " I'd give to you."

This is a poem of romance. the following sentences say it all. "You're like a lovely dream to me.I touch you and you're real."
".. I know when you kiss my lips, that I am all you need."

Let's wish your dream come true.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thank you for this very nice review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the video and the the title: " I'd give to you."

This is a poem of romance. the following sentences say it all. "You're like a lovely dream to me.I touch you and you're real."
".. I know when you kiss my lips, that I am all you need."

Let's wish your dream come true.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thank you! :)

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This poem meets the requirements for the contest. I like how you structured this poem. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you for this great review, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is so well rhymed with a perfect flow and romantic sentiments throughout, I would love to jump into your poem and enjoy the love within it, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you , that's very kind of you to say. Thank you for reading. :)

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Excellent

This is a very nicely written romance poem. It has a Great flow and rhyme scheme.nice background colour and font. i love the video. Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Yes, I can honestly say, God put the exact people in my life, even before I knew him, my wife is the loveliest person I know, do I deserve her? And emphatic, He loves us more than we deserve, well done, an excellent post, blessings Roy
Suggestion "they're yours, just as they should." 5thS, 4L "as flowers are birthed from seed."

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review, it's always great to hear from you. :)

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a nicely romantic poem with no question that it rhymes. It shows that you don't need all the extras when you have love to see you through.
Good luck, keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)

reply by dragonpoet on 07-Feb-2021

Don't mention it.
dp