Sands of Normandy
A patriotic poem inspired by a true experience that I had.59 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
I loved your poem. It was on such a poignant topic. Do you have that hourglass or did you just make it up? You did a great job because it made me feel it was a real experience. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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I loved your poem. It was on such a poignant topic. Do you have that hourglass or did you just make it up? You did a great job because it made me feel it was a real experience. Have a wonderful day. Shirley
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Shirley. The vet with the packets of sand was real. The rest was inspiration.
Comment from papa55mike
We should do this for all of the soldiers who lost their lives in any war. They need to be remembered, always. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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We should do this for all of the soldiers who lost their lives in any war. They need to be remembered, always. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Mike. We can't thank those veterans enough.
Comment from Sanku
I think,I am not sure I have read this poem.I liked it very much . The sand that was given was put in an hour glass.
That was great on your part. .And it has a deep significance for you .
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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I think,I am not sure I have read this poem.I liked it very much . The sand that was given was put in an hour glass.
That was great on your part. .And it has a deep significance for you .
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review, Sanku. This one is one of my best.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This poem is a moving story. Storing the sand in a hour glass is a smart move. Putting the hour glass on a writing desk is a perfect way to remember the Normandy shores and the heroes.
The following paragraph is touching... "Then he placed in my hand that packet of sand, And said when his tears were through, "My time on this earth is almost up, So I'm giving this sand to you."
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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This poem is a moving story. Storing the sand in a hour glass is a smart move. Putting the hour glass on a writing desk is a perfect way to remember the Normandy shores and the heroes.
The following paragraph is touching... "Then he placed in my hand that packet of sand, And said when his tears were through, "My time on this earth is almost up, So I'm giving this sand to you."
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review. Seeing the return of those veterans at the end of that Honor Flight was one of the most emotional experiences that I have ever had.
Comment from Sally Law
This is beautiful in my eyes, Paul. Be forewarned, I'm not a rhyming poet. I prefer the free flowing world of free verse.
I loved the history here, the brave ones we should never forget who died on the beaches of Normandy. We must hold on to our true history and not forget, as the sands of time passes.
Sending you my best today for this marvelous post,
Sal :))
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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This is beautiful in my eyes, Paul. Be forewarned, I'm not a rhyming poet. I prefer the free flowing world of free verse.
I loved the history here, the brave ones we should never forget who died on the beaches of Normandy. We must hold on to our true history and not forget, as the sands of time passes.
Sending you my best today for this marvelous post,
Sal :))
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Sal. Those who fought and died should never be forgotten.
Comment from egomega
Beautifully written tribute to the greatest generation. It touched me personally as my dad was a WWII pilot who lost friends in Normandy. He had some amazing war stories that I wish I had recorded.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Beautifully written tribute to the greatest generation. It touched me personally as my dad was a WWII pilot who lost friends in Normandy. He had some amazing war stories that I wish I had recorded.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review. Some of the stories that come back from war are truly amazing.
Comment from 1Dreamer
What a heartwarming poem and reminder of all those who gave up their lives that day! Love the sand in the hourglass and the part where the beaches were washed of the blood and gore. So grateful for all who fought there. A big thank you for what you did and for sharing it here for all to enjoy.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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What a heartwarming poem and reminder of all those who gave up their lives that day! Love the sand in the hourglass and the part where the beaches were washed of the blood and gore. So grateful for all who fought there. A big thank you for what you did and for sharing it here for all to enjoy.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review. That was a terrible but very important day for our country.
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So true!
Comment from MissMerri
This is definitely a memorable poem and I enjoyed every word of it. It tells a fascinating story and the meter is beautiful. The rhymes are also excellent and creative and artfully used so that they, in no way, distract from your touching story. I loved reading this and was pleased to learn it is based on a true experience. Good luck in the contest Paul. I know this will do well. MM
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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This is definitely a memorable poem and I enjoyed every word of it. It tells a fascinating story and the meter is beautiful. The rhymes are also excellent and creative and artfully used so that they, in no way, distract from your touching story. I loved reading this and was pleased to learn it is based on a true experience. Good luck in the contest Paul. I know this will do well. MM
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks, MM. I always look forward for your reviews.
Comment from Cass Carlton
This is poetry at its best. the rythym and rhyme scheme are perfect, the poem has a narrative that is touching and yet truly inspiring. I sincerely hope you continue to write You have a shining gift, don't let it go to waste. This poem would make the likes of Wilfred Owen proud to own its authorship. cheers Cass Carlton
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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This is poetry at its best. the rythym and rhyme scheme are perfect, the poem has a narrative that is touching and yet truly inspiring. I sincerely hope you continue to write You have a shining gift, don't let it go to waste. This poem would make the likes of Wilfred Owen proud to own its authorship. cheers Cass Carlton
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks, Cass. Your words are too kind. I will try not to disappoint.
Comment from Poetofheart2013
What a great poem
So rich with great emotions and feelings.
Very heartwarming and
touching. And flows really well too. I really
enjoyed reading it
Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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What a great poem
So rich with great emotions and feelings.
Very heartwarming and
touching. And flows really well too. I really
enjoyed reading it
Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2021
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Thanks for the review. I will try to do my best in the future.
