God
What God does45 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
God gives us the essentials. He knows what we need. Not what we desire.
He does not approve of bragging. We are not to be greedy. And money is the root of all evil. Thank you for the great poem.
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God gives us the essentials. He knows what we need. Not what we desire.
He does not approve of bragging. We are not to be greedy. And money is the root of all evil. Thank you for the great poem.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from jwsteele
This poem goes right to the marrow. It leaves no room for misinterpretation. I like how you made these ideas clear. I wish you luck in this contest. Excellent poem.
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This poem goes right to the marrow. It leaves no room for misinterpretation. I like how you made these ideas clear. I wish you luck in this contest. Excellent poem.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this fair, wise and professional review.
Comment from BethShelby
You did a great job of using the required words effectively in a very short piece of writing. This is very nicely and concisely written. Good luck in the contest.
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You did a great job of using the required words effectively in a very short piece of writing. This is very nicely and concisely written. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Shirley McLain
Very nice job. I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. You used all the required words and I did not see any errors. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day. Shirley
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Very nice job. I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. You used all the required words and I did not see any errors. Good luck in the contest. Have a blessed day. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Wendy G
You have included all of the word components of the contest, and seem to have met all requirements. Sending good wishes for your creative entry in the contest.
Wendy
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You have included all of the word components of the contest, and seem to have met all requirements. Sending good wishes for your creative entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Regina Elliott
Grand poem about how God
should not be considered a,
"Santa Claus." I don't care for
prosperity theology. I want to
count the blessings He's
already bestowed on me. You
have written very wisely.
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Grand poem about how God
should not be considered a,
"Santa Claus." I don't care for
prosperity theology. I want to
count the blessings He's
already bestowed on me. You
have written very wisely.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Jay Squires
With all the difficulties the contest originator put in the pathway of any takers, you must be one ambitious person! To that end, you did a marvelous job of using all the keywords and writing something that has inner consistency and a satisfying conclusion. Good luck with the contest.
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With all the difficulties the contest originator put in the pathway of any takers, you must be one ambitious person! To that end, you did a marvelous job of using all the keywords and writing something that has inner consistency and a satisfying conclusion. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Spitfire
Well done. You squeezed all those words into a truth that uplifts us all. I am glad you mentioned 'deserve' since I thought of the homeless who rarely receive gifts --Since a drug habit may have brought about his/her situation, one asks 'what do they deserve?'
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Well done. You squeezed all those words into a truth that uplifts us all. I am glad you mentioned 'deserve' since I thought of the homeless who rarely receive gifts --Since a drug habit may have brought about his/her situation, one asks 'what do they deserve?'
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from Tpa
You did an excellent job in creating such a very short composition and still showed the concept of God without invoking a particular religion. You followed the rules of the contest, and I can only wish you the best.
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You did an excellent job in creating such a very short composition and still showed the concept of God without invoking a particular religion. You followed the rules of the contest, and I can only wish you the best.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the 30 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt with best of wishes in the contest my friend! You adhered to the rules and the storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together;-) The imagery was spot on and tired it all together for a lovely presentation!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)
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Perfect entry for the 30 Word Spiritual Fiction writing prompt with best of wishes in the contest my friend! You adhered to the rules and the storyline is interesting and held my attention throughout the piece and the characters interact nicely together;-) The imagery was spot on and tired it all together for a lovely presentation!
Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
