Ben Paul Persons
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Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Wayne,
This book is coming along nicely. It's well organized and flows nicely.
It would appear that Slim decided to wander during the night. Now the mystery of where did he go.
Well done
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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Wayne,
This book is coming along nicely. It's well organized and flows nicely.
It would appear that Slim decided to wander during the night. Now the mystery of where did he go.
Well done
Cecilia
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2024
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He's certainly old enough to wander.
But in chapter (about 120), he was accused of killing Mary's ex, who hadn't accepted that he was divorced.
Thank you for your very nice review.
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Wayne,
You are welcome
Cecilia
