Christmas With The Animals
When lonliness turns to a Celebration16 total reviews
Comment from royowen
What a lovely story, although her daddy must be rich to have servants in one form or another, longing for her daddy to come home. She meets with a lone reindeer, who pears to likewise be alone, and she figures if she can help him, she can help herself, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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What a lovely story, although her daddy must be rich to have servants in one form or another, longing for her daddy to come home. She meets with a lone reindeer, who pears to likewise be alone, and she figures if she can help him, she can help herself, beautifully written Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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It's got a second part, Roy...which I think you will enjoy even better. I know I did. Thanks so much for the kindness and the review.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Tim Margetts
Hey there< Carol.
I see part two is already up so I shall read it as soon as I finish writing this comment thingy.
Good start, and you are going to make me all mushy again aren't you
Tim x
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hey there< Carol.
I see part two is already up so I shall read it as soon as I finish writing this comment thingy.
Good start, and you are going to make me all mushy again aren't you
Tim x
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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One can not tell a lie.... I think it's a terrific story and I hope you do too. Thanks so much for reading this one and hope you love the next one.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading part 1 and can't wait to read part 2. I am positive Rosie and the young deer will meet up again and help each other.
End of first paragraph has gremlins.
Rosie laughed, "He already likes me better than you. You're always hobnobbing with those snobby horses." (laughed.)
Hank chuckled, "Just doing my job." (chuckled.)
She leaned against the stall door, her voice growing softer. "It's been hard, you know. (softer,)
"You look so sad," she whispered. Are you lost?" (whispered, "Are you lost?")
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed reading part 1 and can't wait to read part 2. I am positive Rosie and the young deer will meet up again and help each other.
End of first paragraph has gremlins.
Rosie laughed, "He already likes me better than you. You're always hobnobbing with those snobby horses." (laughed.)
Hank chuckled, "Just doing my job." (chuckled.)
She leaned against the stall door, her voice growing softer. "It's been hard, you know. (softer,)
"You look so sad," she whispered. Are you lost?" (whispered, "Are you lost?")
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Fixed and I thank you.
Just posted the second half if you care to keep reading. Appreciate the help and the comments.
Smiles, Carol
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Just read it. I like the story. Did you rush to post it??
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is probably your best story, Carol, but then again, I say that to all your stories! LOL. But this is so sweet, and yet so sad. I do hope the little dear will come back with Rosie and meet up with Jasper. That would be nice. I do hope her father comes home and gives her that wonderful Christmas miracle. I'll be watching for chapter 2. Wonderful story, my dear friend. Love you lots. Sandra. xxxx
Oh, found the nit below. FS is always throwing them in!!
(It wouldn't let me post it, so look for the funny thing before ....her father.
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is probably your best story, Carol, but then again, I say that to all your stories! LOL. But this is so sweet, and yet so sad. I do hope the little dear will come back with Rosie and meet up with Jasper. That would be nice. I do hope her father comes home and gives her that wonderful Christmas miracle. I'll be watching for chapter 2. Wonderful story, my dear friend. Love you lots. Sandra. xxxx
Oh, found the nit below. FS is always throwing them in!!
(It wouldn't let me post it, so look for the funny thing before ....her father.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Hi Sandra...You were so fast...I just posted the second part so you don't have to wait till tomorrow. I too loved this story and could see it with illustrations for children. thank you so much...
Love ya, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written with its descriptions of the things in the activities that are taking place in the story. I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it's read aloud your sentence, structured your paragraphing and your punctuation all make it so that it is a very good story to listen to may you have a wonderful day and may God bless you with a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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This is beautifully written with its descriptions of the things in the activities that are taking place in the story. I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it's read aloud your sentence, structured your paragraphing and your punctuation all make it so that it is a very good story to listen to may you have a wonderful day and may God bless you with a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Thank you, Patricia. I am glad that you enjoyed the first part..I just posted the second half. Merry Christmas to you!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Oh, I love this heartwarming story, my friend!! A lonely girl, a lonely deer. Maybe the animals can help the two find each other again and give them both a deeper sense of purpose. I love the interplay of animals, friends and people as your Christmas story builds.
Big hugs,
Rhonda
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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Oh, I love this heartwarming story, my friend!! A lonely girl, a lonely deer. Maybe the animals can help the two find each other again and give them both a deeper sense of purpose. I love the interplay of animals, friends and people as your Christmas story builds.
Big hugs,
Rhonda
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Comment Written 19-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2024
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Don't miss the second half, Rhonda. I think it will really move you...I hope. And I can imagine the illustrations with this one for the children. Thanks so much for the review and of course your kindness.
Love ya, Carol
