Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

You've put a personal touch on the crucifixion of Jesus in this poem. Note: Line 7 has an extra 'that' -- 'I'm just a face that (mocks the Lord). Also, 'He (sang) redemption's song.' I like the picture of forgiveness you've painted in this poem. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024

Thanks Carol, for these terrific comments and review, merry Christmas from me and mine to you and yours, blessings Roy

reply by Carol Clark2 on 24-Dec-2024

Thanks, Roy. I hope your Christmas is lovely. Merry Christmas to you and Elaine and your family. Carol

reply by the author on 25-Dec-2024

It was Carol, spent with family, my Eder child holidaying in called too.

Comment from Rick Gardner

Excellent

A life to live, a path to follow. A cross to bear, we face death daily, not knowing when is the day. Rejoice Jesus will be back again and again. My words. My poem.
The Spirit Inside
The sky is your father,
The earth is your mother,
Share the mystery of giving,
The Father and Son to listen and learn,
The Spirit tells you.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024

Thanks Rick, for these excellent comments and review, merry Christmas from me and mine to you and yours, blessings Roy

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I have been at the death bed side of many friends and each one of them were devoted to God. I would be heart broken to see a friend reject God at deaths door. Well written Roy.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024

Thanks D&V, for these magnificent comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

Another poem expresses your Christian faith and what it means to be a Christian. I liked the first stanza the best as it sums up nicely the theme of the poem.

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024

Thanks so much Jake, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from bob cullen

Exceptional

Couldn't give this any less than six. The message is clear. Forgiveness is out there. We simply must seek it. I'm not sure this is possible, but your writing seems to get better and better. After reading your poetry, I start to reflect. You really do make me think and I appreciate that.

 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024

Thanks so much Bob, for these fantastic comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Thank you Roy for this truthful account of the crucifixion and the notes with the biblical description that so many people ignore nowadays. I enjoyed it and it built my faith as I read!

Melissa

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 Comment Written 22-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2024

Thanks so much Melissa, for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy