Jeremiah and the Pond
A Lesson in Listening and Learning16 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Nice! A story with a lesson!
I always wondered what a frog would say if it could talk. Guess Timmy is lucky that it did not ask him for a kiss. Ha!
Fun read.
Douglas
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Nice! A story with a lesson!
I always wondered what a frog would say if it could talk. Guess Timmy is lucky that it did not ask him for a kiss. Ha!
Fun read.
Douglas
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sugarray77
What a lovely story Carol. I felt you shared so many constructive points in this one. Helping an artist/writer see that you have to use feeling in your work is a lovely lesson and one I hope we all take to heart. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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What a lovely story Carol. I felt you shared so many constructive points in this one. Helping an artist/writer see that you have to use feeling in your work is a lovely lesson and one I hope we all take to heart. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I have to give you a six for this one, I loved it. You explain how to feel a view rather than just see it. I will do that next time we walk down to the nature reserve pond. These little stories of Timmy and his paintings are lovely. Well done, my friend. Love you lots. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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I have to give you a six for this one, I loved it. You explain how to feel a view rather than just see it. I will do that next time we walk down to the nature reserve pond. These little stories of Timmy and his paintings are lovely. Well done, my friend. Love you lots. Sandra xx
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Thanks, Sandra. I know I sent you a pm thank you but of course I need to always tell you how much I appreciate you. I've been thanking people all day and I still have 238 to go....
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Adorable story. I think children would enjoy reading this. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Timmy sat down at the pond's edge, (you can delete 'down', it's understood)
his gigantic eyes twinkling with mischief. (love the description)
then gazed around the pond to see if anyone was listening before he answered. "Can you keep a secret?" (answered,)
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Adorable story. I think children would enjoy reading this. Thank you for sharing this with us.
Timmy sat down at the pond's edge, (you can delete 'down', it's understood)
his gigantic eyes twinkling with mischief. (love the description)
then gazed around the pond to see if anyone was listening before he answered. "Can you keep a secret?" (answered,)
Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Carol,
What a wonderful story. I wonder if that's what I need to do and close my eyes and believe. It sure would make life great. I love this series you have working. To be as talented.
Well done my sister
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Carol,
What a wonderful story. I wonder if that's what I need to do and close my eyes and believe. It sure would make life great. I love this series you have working. To be as talented.
Well done my sister
Love ya lots,
Cecilia
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Hi, sister you are very welcome
Comment from patcelaw
Being an amateur artist, I very much enjoy this story of Timmy and Jeremiah the bullfrog. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a wonderful day and may you have a blessed new year. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Being an amateur artist, I very much enjoy this story of Timmy and Jeremiah the bullfrog. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. I also wish you a wonderful day and may you have a blessed new year. Patricia.
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Comment Written 29-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
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Better late than never but the sentiment is the same...Thank you for always having my back, supporting me and for enjoying what I write. I appreciate it very much.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
