Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

I think you would do well selling your Naughty Bits II poem to one of the referred to sites friend. You hope it's self explanatory! ha ha, might be a bit too graphic for some on site friend[they can be a bit temperamental sometimes]even when there is a big f-n warning attached. I'm still laughing, but I'm bad to the Bone, ha ha. Good luck friend.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009

Thakms Hitch!
I already have been dinged for content by a couple of prudish types,but who cares? I don't write to please everybody. And the Bible belchers shouldn't even be reading it!
Anyway, thanks for your comments mate, I really do appreciate them.
Sincerely,
Curt

Comment from Vladilynn

Excellent

Geeeeeesssshh!! Thank you!
Wow!! makes me wonder what behind that link.com!!
haaaaaaaaaa..haaaaaa.well I'll just read more of your post!! to save my PC for crashing down!! LOLL

Thank you for sharing!

well~ I can say that my post bored you! for being too long!
yours enough to be read and satisfied for the content!

love much,

Lynn ( ^ __________ ^ )}
hihaaaa!! good luck!!

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009

Thank you Lynn!
I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. I never thought your work was too long, and it certainly wasn't boring!
Thanks again,
Curt

Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea

Excellent

TSK TSK TSK My friend, you've summed it up in a NUTshell. LOL! I don't know about you, yet I do. I miss you. Yer a NUT. hehehe...

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009

It's my contest and I thought it needed to have the pot stirred a little.
I miss you too Pea.
Love ya,
Curt

reply by Kentucky Sweet Pea on 31-Jan-2009

eh, i've been in a rut i reckon. maybe not. maybe i'm getting out of one. i'm still sorting it all out. thanks friend!

much love,
pen

Comment from pabelk

Excellent

Naughty bits is an understatement. Your imagery is amazing. Incorporating the world in the society of porn and sexual needs just shows that desires are everywhere. The rhyming and rhythm is very good and easy to read.

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009

Thank you so much for yuor sincere comments. i do appreciate them.
Sincerely,
Curt

Comment from AlvinTEthington

Excellent

You illustrate well the intersection of sexual addiction with internet addiction. You show how sex can be objectified by pornography quite well. This is fast food sex which one doesn't savor. Turn on, get off,and move to the next fantasy scene. No wonder people don't communicate well in romantic relationship in today's societies. Biting social criticism.

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 Comment Written 25-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2009

Thank you so much Alvin.
Your absolutely right about the lack of communication in relationships being hampered by the availability of "escape" into the cyber-realm. I believe it can be as valid an addiction as gambling.
Thanks again,
Curt

reply by AlvinTEthington on 26-Jan-2009

Yes, most psychiatrists and psychologists saw what they were terming "internet addiction" when the medium first became popular. With its novelty dying out, many people have stopped spending so much time on the Internet, but there are hard-core addicts. I have to be careful, because I work on the computer (I actually am a professional writer and reviewer), and I sometimes forget to eat or get enough sleep, so I know whereof you write.