My Book of Favored Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "This Christmas Morn"My collection of various sonnets.
27 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Dawn,
A difficult rhyming style which you carried off well. Lets force evil out the door, recognize Christ and love for all.
Merry Christmas,
Winslow
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Dear Dawn,
A difficult rhyming style which you carried off well. Lets force evil out the door, recognize Christ and love for all.
Merry Christmas,
Winslow
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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And I hope you had a blessed Christmas. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from Trybuck
Early morning for us is our quiet time together, to welcome the new day by reading, and praying.
Enjoyed your poem and hope it does well for you, Buck
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Early morning for us is our quiet time together, to welcome the new day by reading, and praying.
Enjoyed your poem and hope it does well for you, Buck
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Morning prayer is very important, it's when all is still in the world and we are closer to God. Thank you for taking the time to read and sharing.
Comment from Mastery
Good job, Dawn...Nice-flowing poetry. I like the emphasis you put on helping our fellow man as it were. I especially liked this stanza.
"Let's join our hearts together, one by one,
uplift our voices now unto the Lord.
Let's pray the evil spread can be undone
so hope and harmony can be restored.
Incidentally, don't mind my saying so, but "the eyes have it" in your photo. LOL..(smile)
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Good job, Dawn...Nice-flowing poetry. I like the emphasis you put on helping our fellow man as it were. I especially liked this stanza.
"Let's join our hearts together, one by one,
uplift our voices now unto the Lord.
Let's pray the evil spread can be undone
so hope and harmony can be restored.
Incidentally, don't mind my saying so, but "the eyes have it" in your photo. LOL..(smile)
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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LOL, thanks so much for that compliment and for the review. I do have nice eyes for an old broad, ;)
Comment from mermaids
This is a good Christmas poem that brings the message out of peace and hope on this day. Good flow of words and verses. Rhyming is excellent, no revisions needed.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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This is a good Christmas poem that brings the message out of peace and hope on this day. Good flow of words and verses. Rhyming is excellent, no revisions needed.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review. Hope you had a blessed Christmas
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Good evening to you Poet and thank you for sharing your wonderful poem it surely helps to spread the message of Christmas. Merry Christmas. Loyd
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Good evening to you Poet and thank you for sharing your wonderful poem it surely helps to spread the message of Christmas. Merry Christmas. Loyd
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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I hope you had a very Blessed Christmas. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.
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The same to you and you are welcome, Loyd
Comment from fictionwriter
If only. I don't know how you do it, my kids are not asleep early this Christmas morn. But I enjoyed your poem about celebrating the birth of Jesus. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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If only. I don't know how you do it, my kids are not asleep early this Christmas morn. But I enjoyed your poem about celebrating the birth of Jesus. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Ah well I guess I'm a lucky mom this year, LOL Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from joemass
G'day Dawn
Neat, thoughtful, well put together- totally unlike my efforts at wrapping Christmas presents!
Have a good one1
Joemass
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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G'day Dawn
Neat, thoughtful, well put together- totally unlike my efforts at wrapping Christmas presents!
Have a good one1
Joemass
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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I'm not so good at the wrapping myself, thanks so much for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from L.lora
A somber write for the
season which expertly
extolls the premise of
the holiday season. You've
put voice to the silent thoughts
that so many do not voice at this
time of year, kudos to you.
Well written and presented, no
nits of spags... Lora
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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A somber write for the
season which expertly
extolls the premise of
the holiday season. You've
put voice to the silent thoughts
that so many do not voice at this
time of year, kudos to you.
Well written and presented, no
nits of spags... Lora
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Thank you for your very understanding review, so very much appreciated. I hope you had a very blessed Christmas day.
Comment from Shirley B
Beautiful poem. You are so right. In this day where so many parts of the world that knows unrest, we need to take time out and remember it is Christ birthday. Merry Christmas. Lovely poem, Shirley
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Beautiful poem. You are so right. In this day where so many parts of the world that knows unrest, we need to take time out and remember it is Christ birthday. Merry Christmas. Lovely poem, Shirley
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Thank you Shirley, really appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Comment from LovnPeace
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful and full of hope and love for our Savior. Merry Christmas to you also sweety. Peace be with us all. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful and full of hope and love for our Savior. Merry Christmas to you also sweety. Peace be with us all. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 25-Dec-2009
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2009
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Thank you, dear Barbara, I pray peace be with you as well. All my love your way. Thank you for the stars and helping to promote this. Much appreciate that.
