Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Prologue "Introductory Synopsis"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from ProjectBluebook
This is interesting... I realize you got two of the four senses. Sight, sound -- there is touch and smell left. Just an observation. Since you got Vision and Sound -- maybe Touch and Smell will follow. So when we enter this contest, we must do the synopsis first? This give sme an idea of what the novel will be like. Yep, sounds a bit like reincarnation. Some believe in reincarnation. Some preachers preach that we have three lives. Born spiritually at different times not knowing their previous life. This sounds logical and I dare those to discount this theory. It could really happen. How do we know after our memories are vanquished? Supernatural powers. My sixth natural sense tells me to start this novel with six stars. Hopefully a good Omen. I will follow this novel. Maybe other readers ought to check this out? Count your doubloon, Mai Ke Er. Good luck with your new novel masterpiece. Gu Guai
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This is interesting... I realize you got two of the four senses. Sight, sound -- there is touch and smell left. Just an observation. Since you got Vision and Sound -- maybe Touch and Smell will follow. So when we enter this contest, we must do the synopsis first? This give sme an idea of what the novel will be like. Yep, sounds a bit like reincarnation. Some believe in reincarnation. Some preachers preach that we have three lives. Born spiritually at different times not knowing their previous life. This sounds logical and I dare those to discount this theory. It could really happen. How do we know after our memories are vanquished? Supernatural powers. My sixth natural sense tells me to start this novel with six stars. Hopefully a good Omen. I will follow this novel. Maybe other readers ought to check this out? Count your doubloon, Mai Ke Er. Good luck with your new novel masterpiece. Gu Guai
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
Comment from CR Delport
I think it is inevitable. Our daily beliefs and experiences will always show in our writing, which makes every person's writing so unique. This sounds like a really good story. Look forward to reading it.
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I think it is inevitable. Our daily beliefs and experiences will always show in our writing, which makes every person's writing so unique. This sounds like a really good story. Look forward to reading it.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2014
Comment from faragon
I like the premise of your coming story. I too believe that souls come back each time and hopefully, learn from their mistakes. I also believe we are drawn to people for unknown reasons, as if we have known them before. Can't wait to read more!
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I like the premise of your coming story. I too believe that souls come back each time and hopefully, learn from their mistakes. I also believe we are drawn to people for unknown reasons, as if we have known them before. Can't wait to read more!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Mike,
if you articulate yourself in your story the way you have wet our appetites with this introductory synopsis, I know it will be a read that will capture much interest and I for one, can't wait to see where you are going to take it... sounds like a great plot and one I'll eagerly await to read. Good luck my friend, I'm on board, this introduction made sure of that.
With our thoughts we create,
a higher knowing,
James.
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Hi Mike,
if you articulate yourself in your story the way you have wet our appetites with this introductory synopsis, I know it will be a read that will capture much interest and I for one, can't wait to see where you are going to take it... sounds like a great plot and one I'll eagerly await to read. Good luck my friend, I'm on board, this introduction made sure of that.
With our thoughts we create,
a higher knowing,
James.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
Comment from Spitfire
Could be interesting. I'd like to know if you're read any books on the subject such as the works of Edgar Cayce and Ruth Montgomery. More recent is The Destiny of Souls (can't remember the author) and many more. You might find some listed under "metaphysical studies or books". Try google.
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Could be interesting. I'd like to know if you're read any books on the subject such as the works of Edgar Cayce and Ruth Montgomery. More recent is The Destiny of Souls (can't remember the author) and many more. You might find some listed under "metaphysical studies or books". Try google.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
Comment from seaglass
This sounds very interesting and I'm looking forward to it's beginning. It sounds like a great idea and I'm curious how you'll develop it. I so believe, that we really don't know the truth about the hear-after. Our doctrines are tipped heavily by the teachings of the medieval church leaders who took every term, 'pearly gates', 'streets of gold', etc as literal.
Billy Gramm stated that he believed God put far too much troubled thought an into creating humanity, sending his son, and patiently striving with us, to have us spend eternity skipping around the throne, singing all day.
We will have purpose, responsibility and meaning.
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This sounds very interesting and I'm looking forward to it's beginning. It sounds like a great idea and I'm curious how you'll develop it. I so believe, that we really don't know the truth about the hear-after. Our doctrines are tipped heavily by the teachings of the medieval church leaders who took every term, 'pearly gates', 'streets of gold', etc as literal.
Billy Gramm stated that he believed God put far too much troubled thought an into creating humanity, sending his son, and patiently striving with us, to have us spend eternity skipping around the throne, singing all day.
We will have purpose, responsibility and meaning.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
Comment from tbacha58
Hi Mike, I am so so happy that the writing is big, so I can at least share your writing. I missed being next to you reading your stories. I love the introduction writing about my favorite beliefs in Christianity. I am sure you will excel as usual. Miss u, love u Terry xoxo
By the way, I did not see your name about one of our colleagues , Maureen, she had a second operation in her throat for cancer, on her web site her friend Ted is keeping us informed. She is ok for now, her daughters are next to her always. I know you would have liked to know about her. Bless u Terry xoxo
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Hi Mike, I am so so happy that the writing is big, so I can at least share your writing. I missed being next to you reading your stories. I love the introduction writing about my favorite beliefs in Christianity. I am sure you will excel as usual. Miss u, love u Terry xoxo
By the way, I did not see your name about one of our colleagues , Maureen, she had a second operation in her throat for cancer, on her web site her friend Ted is keeping us informed. She is ok for now, her daughters are next to her always. I know you would have liked to know about her. Bless u Terry xoxo
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
Comment from Sankey
God bless you my dear FS friend and bro. So glad we met all that time ago (over a year ago now wow!) Look forward to this new adventure. So glad we do have our relationship in Christ in common dear mate. Still working on reducing for FS purposes only the sizes of chapters in my Autobiography.
Love you mate.
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God bless you my dear FS friend and bro. So glad we met all that time ago (over a year ago now wow!) Look forward to this new adventure. So glad we do have our relationship in Christ in common dear mate. Still working on reducing for FS purposes only the sizes of chapters in my Autobiography.
Love you mate.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
Comment from Twilightspire
Sounds interesting. While nit wholly unique in general, the specifics show a great deal of creativity.
I can see how much fun you'd have with this, but I'd be ready for quite a challenge.
You didn't mention what the conflict would be in your synopsis. Is it because you aren't sure or because you just didn't mention it. That was the part I meant by it becoming difficult. The conflict would have to be just as unique as the story and sometimes with these kind if stories that can be challenging.
I'm not sure if fantasy would be a good label. Maybe supernatural or paranormal. Just my opinion. Or maybe just leave it as a general story until you see how it plays out.
Good luck on this project. It has a lot if possibilities.
-T.J.
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Sounds interesting. While nit wholly unique in general, the specifics show a great deal of creativity.
I can see how much fun you'd have with this, but I'd be ready for quite a challenge.
You didn't mention what the conflict would be in your synopsis. Is it because you aren't sure or because you just didn't mention it. That was the part I meant by it becoming difficult. The conflict would have to be just as unique as the story and sometimes with these kind if stories that can be challenging.
I'm not sure if fantasy would be a good label. Maybe supernatural or paranormal. Just my opinion. Or maybe just leave it as a general story until you see how it plays out.
Good luck on this project. It has a lot if possibilities.
-T.J.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
Comment from nancy_e_davis
I would think fantasy. It sounds very interesting. I will try to stay with you all the way health willing. I think it may be a brilliant idea. I've seen several movies along those lines. Good luck with it. Nancy
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I would think fantasy. It sounds very interesting. I will try to stay with you all the way health willing. I think it may be a brilliant idea. I've seen several movies along those lines. Good luck with it. Nancy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2014
