Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Born Enemies: The Battle Begins"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from Sasha
Sorry, I liked the 'little' headings, they helped clarify the who, where and what of the story. Great work with this and kept me glued to the screen from beginning to end. I anxiously look forward to the next post.
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Sorry, I liked the 'little' headings, they helped clarify the who, where and what of the story. Great work with this and kept me glued to the screen from beginning to end. I anxiously look forward to the next post.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
Comment from robina1978
I loved this chapter. It finally gets to the ghosts that are there. I think you are doing great. Thanks for sharing.
You are getting quite good.
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I loved this chapter. It finally gets to the ghosts that are there. I think you are doing great. Thanks for sharing.
You are getting quite good.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
Comment from Sankey
Yeah a bit complicated but never mind. We made it through. Good work and I don't think there were any spags hey! Whaddayano huh!
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Yeah a bit complicated but never mind. We made it through. Good work and I don't think there were any spags hey! Whaddayano huh!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2014
Comment from GracieAnn
Mikey, this yesteryear of when noble soldiers fought fiercely for their country is depicted so well. Duty trumped romance so many times. But then there was Cleopatra, Caesar, and Mark Anthony. Great research went into this. Well done, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
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Mikey, this yesteryear of when noble soldiers fought fiercely for their country is depicted so well. Duty trumped romance so many times. But then there was Cleopatra, Caesar, and Mark Anthony. Great research went into this. Well done, my friend. :0 GracieAnn
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
Comment from Jay Squires
What a dilemma for Tibertin! He is in battle with Allutia's father. How can he kill Artabanus and expect love to develop and flower with trust if he kills her father. And, if Artabanus kills him ... ooops!
What a delicious ending!
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What a dilemma for Tibertin! He is in battle with Allutia's father. How can he kill Artabanus and expect love to develop and flower with trust if he kills her father. And, if Artabanus kills him ... ooops!
What a delicious ending!
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
Comment from nordicgirl
Whhoo hhooo!! I must say this is some battle scene. Wow. Aren't you a hippie pacifist? Well I guess that doesn't preclude you from making things up as you like to say. Cannot wait to here the conclusion. This was set up perfectly and everyone arrived just as smooth as glass.
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Whhoo hhooo!! I must say this is some battle scene. Wow. Aren't you a hippie pacifist? Well I guess that doesn't preclude you from making things up as you like to say. Cannot wait to here the conclusion. This was set up perfectly and everyone arrived just as smooth as glass.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2014
