Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Julia Describes Her Visions"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from robina1978
In the conversation it turns out that Julia has the same capacities as Florentina. This makes her understand the girl so well.
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In the conversation it turns out that Julia has the same capacities as Florentina. This makes her understand the girl so well.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. The group is forming bonds. Florentia needs someone she can trust. Julia needs someone to calm her down. She fights for the right to be herself, but she can not be that way with everyone. Perhaps if she finds more like herself. Great work.
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I love the story. The group is forming bonds. Florentia needs someone she can trust. Julia needs someone to calm her down. She fights for the right to be herself, but she can not be that way with everyone. Perhaps if she finds more like herself. Great work.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Lovely scene with the two of them on their walk. I suppose Val understands Julia as much as possible now. The closeness he feels is surely proof that she's not crazy. :)
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Lovely scene with the two of them on their walk. I suppose Val understands Julia as much as possible now. The closeness he feels is surely proof that she's not crazy. :)
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from gypsycaravan
"The cause need not be just, it but need be a cause." This is a great line and all too true. Your story is fascinating to me. Interesting that Valerius feels a 'draw' or 'pull' toward Julia, but doesn't understand it. Don't we often have that same feeling towards people who become best friends or spouses? I wonder how many lives we share with the "close spirits" in our present. Thanks for writing and posting this, mikey.
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"The cause need not be just, it but need be a cause." This is a great line and all too true. Your story is fascinating to me. Interesting that Valerius feels a 'draw' or 'pull' toward Julia, but doesn't understand it. Don't we often have that same feeling towards people who become best friends or spouses? I wonder how many lives we share with the "close spirits" in our present. Thanks for writing and posting this, mikey.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
Comment from seaglass
I wonder if Leopold will be mean spirited in every incarnation. This clears up any confusion of who the lovers will end up being. romantic.But I'm a romantic so I want someone for Lordes too.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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I wonder if Leopold will be mean spirited in every incarnation. This clears up any confusion of who the lovers will end up being. romantic.But I'm a romantic so I want someone for Lordes too.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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AHHH! Okay, you got it. I don't think that Leopold will be, but he has an issue to resolve. Not sure if he will in this particular lifetime, probably not. When he returns to Heaven he isn't bitter, he's just one of the souls. I'm not completely clear on how it works nor is the narrator. So, we don't know and there are things the souls don't know either. I have someone in mind for Lourdes. Fries with that order? :)
Comment from Jay Squires
Another chapter of the high caliber we are used to. Julia's story of the past life connected her and valerius with Leopold is telling.
And we know there will be a romance brewing between Valerius and Julia -- don't try to weasel out of it!
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Another chapter of the high caliber we are used to. Julia's story of the past life connected her and valerius with Leopold is telling.
And we know there will be a romance brewing between Valerius and Julia -- don't try to weasel out of it!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Yeah. I know. Hahaha. I've already been told I have to find a guy for Lourdes too!! Yes, she goes way back with both of them. Leopold has been a nemesis from the earliest days.
Comment from Eigle Rull
We continue now as Valerius takes Julia ourside (outside) to consult with her in private
You certainly have a lot of talent in writing, my friend. This piece was excellent in every way. It was interesting and held my attention well. The storyline is great and the dialog is fantastic. I enjoyed reading this piece very much, my friend.
Always with respect,
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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We continue now as Valerius takes Julia ourside (outside) to consult with her in private
You certainly have a lot of talent in writing, my friend. This piece was excellent in every way. It was interesting and held my attention well. The storyline is great and the dialog is fantastic. I enjoyed reading this piece very much, my friend.
Always with respect,
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2014
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Good catch. Thank you. I appreciate the encouraging words. So pleased you enjoyed it. Hope you are doing well. Thanks for the great review! mikey
