Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "The Priests Who Cried Wolf"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from CR Delport
That makes at least 4 priests now that is not to be trusted. It is often the people we trust that can do us the most harm. I hope Julia and the others can make their escape. Curious how Valerius knew that Julia needed him. Another well crafted chapter.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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That makes at least 4 priests now that is not to be trusted. It is often the people we trust that can do us the most harm. I hope Julia and the others can make their escape. Curious how Valerius knew that Julia needed him. Another well crafted chapter.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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There is a connection between them. I just want to allude to it without overly highlighting it. I really don't want this story to end. Hahaha. But, I suppose it must. mikey
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Grrr... I hope the wolves kill the priests. Oh pleeeez let the wolves get them. And describe the scene in gory detail. I want to see a wolf chew out Leopold's eyes... maybe chew off his dick too. Same for Rasty. Maybe the young priest can get away with losing an arm. He should live as an example to other uppity murderous demonic priests! You can tell I'm very involved with your story.. LOL!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Grrr... I hope the wolves kill the priests. Oh pleeeez let the wolves get them. And describe the scene in gory detail. I want to see a wolf chew out Leopold's eyes... maybe chew off his dick too. Same for Rasty. Maybe the young priest can get away with losing an arm. He should live as an example to other uppity murderous demonic priests! You can tell I'm very involved with your story.. LOL!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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It could be worse for the priests, I could let YOU get a hold of them. :) I'm going to have to bring Dean in as a technical adviser! I'll see what I can have befall them. mikey
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Pleeez make it gorrrry. I hate gore 90% of the time (cuz in horror stories it happens to innocents), but when a bastard deserves it, I'm all for it. And yes, I'd be happy to take care of them... just send them my way. Muahaha....
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the story. The wolves are at the redy. Forentia's father is trying to protect her. Cassuis may have been given a clue. If thy prove Julia is physially sick and is cured, they may have a chance to protect her. Great work.
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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I love the story. The wolves are at the redy. Forentia's father is trying to protect her. Cassuis may have been given a clue. If thy prove Julia is physially sick and is cured, they may have a chance to protect her. Great work.
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Yes, you have it right about the wolves. Now, I have to figure out what the wolves are going to do! I don't think the bad priests are going to be happy about it. :) mikey
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Michael: I like your stories..the plot thickens. The wolves howl and appear to the priests...Dean Kuch would have the wolves attack the priests. Ok, I read his stories too as a challenge. I look up to you as a writer and friend. Well written and suspenful. flylikeaneagle
Have a blessed Thanksgiving.
Pray for my daughter, Annie, 16 and in stress and unhappy. We were in the hospital last night with Annie having an emotional melt down. My other daughter, Monica, is in college with psychology degree, trying to help people with mental depression and doing research labs with professors. The light needs to shine in this darkness and expose the truth. nancy
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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Michael: I like your stories..the plot thickens. The wolves howl and appear to the priests...Dean Kuch would have the wolves attack the priests. Ok, I read his stories too as a challenge. I look up to you as a writer and friend. Well written and suspenful. flylikeaneagle
Have a blessed Thanksgiving.
Pray for my daughter, Annie, 16 and in stress and unhappy. We were in the hospital last night with Annie having an emotional melt down. My other daughter, Monica, is in college with psychology degree, trying to help people with mental depression and doing research labs with professors. The light needs to shine in this darkness and expose the truth. nancy
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2014
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I'll try not to get as graphic as Dean though he does have influence a bit. Ha! Sorry your daughter is experiencing difficulty. That's a tough age. Everything means so much and is so important and no one believes it all matters so much. I still think about things from those days. She'll be in my prayers. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving, all of you. mikey
