Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "And Where It Lands...."Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from Sankey
Good work again mate. Thanks for an interesting read for sure. Still with you but I sense we are nearing the end?
Some spags:
no match (for)those soldiers,
The(y) walked slowly searching for them.
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Good work again mate. Thanks for an interesting read for sure. Still with you but I sense we are nearing the end?
Some spags:
no match (for)those soldiers,
The(y) walked slowly searching for them.
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
Comment from seaglass
Great, Julia missed the arrow. Sometimes I think Oracle is Trellitia's former husband, back to protect her like the wolves protect the child. How did you come up with all these n names?
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Great, Julia missed the arrow. Sometimes I think Oracle is Trellitia's former husband, back to protect her like the wolves protect the child. How did you come up with all these n names?
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Comment Written 07-Dec-2014
