Comment from CR Delport

Excellent

For the moment, Valerius seem to have defused the situation, but the rolling sound of approaching animals sounds ominous. This is another well crafted chapter.
Have a great new year.
Christelle.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2014

Comment from seaglass

Excellent

Very exciting...the deadly disease is working in their favor if they can only survive it.

"We'll (great)--(greet) them in front of Trellitia's home."

"He was attacked by wolves in the forest, (him,)--(he,) Father Rastavius and Father Cervantes"

"The Bishop stood (their--(there)) unmoving."

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 Comment Written 31-Dec-2014

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Good chapter mate. Great to see you back. Hope you and your wife managed to get a break. Did you have someone to look after your residents and get some time away?
Anyway, still good story. Some spags for ya.

"We'll gre(e)at them in front

pulling it w(-h)ere dressed

The Bishop stood their (there)unmoving.


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