Vision and Sound: Their Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "Leopold Seeks Justice, More Plague"Two souls that meet as strangers on earth.
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Comment from CR Delport
Okay, that was a surprise,but a good one. The Oracle turned out to be the Cardinal. Hopefully Leopold will stay dead now. With both Julia and Valerius having new sores, that doesn't bode well. Another interesting and gripping installment. Good job, Mikey.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Okay, that was a surprise,but a good one. The Oracle turned out to be the Cardinal. Hopefully Leopold will stay dead now. With both Julia and Valerius having new sores, that doesn't bode well. Another interesting and gripping installment. Good job, Mikey.
Have a great day.
Christelle.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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I can't believe the number of posts in my in box. I was going to cut back on posts and catch up!! Glad you liked this. I missed this. mikey
Comment from Sankey
I feel like this is coming to an end. Leopold has demised and the oracle has transformed into something much more superior than he was.
Good story mate. Some spags....The(-y) disease took its toll however, and two of Winston's
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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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I feel like this is coming to an end. Leopold has demised and the oracle has transformed into something much more superior than he was.
Good story mate. Some spags....The(-y) disease took its toll however, and two of Winston's
In Author notes....Sorry for the sparseness or(f) posting.
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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Good eyes as always. I've become better! I'm way behind. Just jumping ahead to say hello. :))
Comment from Jay Squires
"You must lay down yourself. [You must LIE down yourself. >> I can't imagine why you'd want a character to purposely use poor grammar, Mikey. LOL ... even the God of this novel, cannot rise above the Grammar police!]
Good job, as expected.
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"You must lay down yourself. [You must LIE down yourself. >> I can't imagine why you'd want a character to purposely use poor grammar, Mikey. LOL ... even the God of this novel, cannot rise above the Grammar police!]
Good job, as expected.
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Comment Written 07-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2015
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It's just Lourdes the forest dwelling scrub nurse! I try to avoid the whole lay/lie scenario whenever possible. Ha! I always get it wrong. You should have seen my SPAG a year ago. I didn't know a thing about grammar. Thank God know one knows where I live. :))
