The Gardens at Weatherbury
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Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
A nice beginning with just the right combination of simplicity and humor. The appearance of the gnome Constantine at the end is very intriguing. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Excellent start.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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A nice beginning with just the right combination of simplicity and humor. The appearance of the gnome Constantine at the end is very intriguing. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Excellent start.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Hooray! I am so very glad you've decided to jump in and follow Nicholas and company!! :) Fantasy is what I enjoy the most... in fact, Even though I'm purposefully keeping each one to about 500 words on purpose, it is so-o-o tempting to go longer!! ;) :) But, I shall persevere (wink, wink!) and I'm so happy you'll be along for the adventure! ;) Take care out there and enjoy the adventure! ;) Yvette
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
Good story opening. I also like Nicholas as a character. I thought the part about cutting off George Thrasher's package was funny. Good story thus far.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Good story opening. I also like Nicholas as a character. I thought the part about cutting off George Thrasher's package was funny. Good story thus far.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Oh, Natalie, I am so very glad you've decided to jump in and follow Nicholas and company!! :) Fantasy is what I enjoy the most... in fact, Even though I'm purposefully keeping each one to about 500 words on purpose, it is so-o-o tempting to go longer!! ;) :) But, I shall persevere (wink, wink!) and I'm so happy you'll be along for the adventure! ;) Take care this week, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from BethShelby
I was avoiding fantasy fiction although I'm not sure why because I've written some myself but since you have all your chapters paying, I'll take a look. This is good writing. I like it.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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I was avoiding fantasy fiction although I'm not sure why because I've written some myself but since you have all your chapters paying, I'll take a look. This is good writing. I like it.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2020
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Oh, Beth, I am so very glad you've decided to jump in and follow Nicholas and company!! :) Fantasy is what I enjoy the most... in fact, Even though I'm purposefully keeping each one to about 500 words on purpose, it is so-o-o tempting to go longer!! ;) :) But, I shall persevere (wink, wink!) and I'm so happy you'll be along for the adventure! ;) You see, I'm only 3 days behind now...LOL!! ;) Take care, my lady! ;) Yvette
Comment from w.j.debi
I decided to start at the first chapter as you recommended. This looks like there could be a bit of magic coming. Nicholas looks like he got lucky and found his calling early in life. I look forward to seeing what else the gardens may reveal.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I decided to start at the first chapter as you recommended. This looks like there could be a bit of magic coming. Nicholas looks like he got lucky and found his calling early in life. I look forward to seeing what else the gardens may reveal.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Hooray!! So glad you're joining in, W.J.!! Crossing my fingers you enjoy the adventure!! ;) Yvette
Comment from Diana L Crawford
Oh my, I can't believe I've been missing this story! It already seems like a wonderful story developing! I will be on this like white (or brown lol) on rice!
See you in chapter 2! xoxo
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Oh my, I can't believe I've been missing this story! It already seems like a wonderful story developing! I will be on this like white (or brown lol) on rice!
See you in chapter 2! xoxo
Comment Written 14-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2020
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Hooray! So glad you've decided to come along for the adventure!! ;) :) Thank you so very much for your support, Diana! ;) :) Yvette
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Oh yeah! This is my kind of story! I got enough reality going on, so wonderful to steal off into a good fantasy! xoxo
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Steal off any time, my lady -- it is why I write fantasy!! ;) :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I'm glad you steered me to this prologue, YM. I enjoyed reading it and know more about the main character and the setting. I'm glad you added it to your book to make it easier to find for others who haven't read it. Your words were filled with good imagery and great dialogue. I look forward to following the chapters as they are shared. Thanks for this informative prologue. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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I'm glad you steered me to this prologue, YM. I enjoyed reading it and know more about the main character and the setting. I'm glad you added it to your book to make it easier to find for others who haven't read it. Your words were filled with good imagery and great dialogue. I look forward to following the chapters as they are shared. Thanks for this informative prologue. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Jan.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2020
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Oh, hooray!! :) Means the world that you're on-board with Nicholas and friends, Jan ... THANK YOU! :) Take out there! ;) Yvete
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A wonderful opening for what appears to be a good story ahead.
The characters are clear and the story well laid out and told.
I look forward to reading more.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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A wonderful opening for what appears to be a good story ahead.
The characters are clear and the story well laid out and told.
I look forward to reading more.
Sharon
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Hooray!! So glad you're joining in, Sharon!! Crossing my fingers you enjoy the adventure!! ;) Yvette
Comment from May 1
This prologue is so interesting, nothing has turned out the way I expected it and I love that. It's quite an interesting start to the story. Of course, I especially love the ending. An amazing twist for me.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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This prologue is so interesting, nothing has turned out the way I expected it and I love that. It's quite an interesting start to the story. Of course, I especially love the ending. An amazing twist for me.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2020
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Thanx for the review on the Prologue, May -- hope you find the time to catch up with us! ;) Have a great week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Melonie Kirchoff
Oooh off to a very interesting start! It caught me up into the story very quickly and now I'm off to read the rest! Great job! Keep it up and happy writing!!
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Oooh off to a very interesting start! It caught me up into the story very quickly and now I'm off to read the rest! Great job! Keep it up and happy writing!!
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Oh, Melonie, so glad you've decided to catch up with Nicholas and his adventures -- thank you for your time, ma'am, and I hope you enjoy!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Pinder
Great prologue to your book, which appears to be very entertaining and magical. looking forward to the first chapter and plan to keep reading.
Write on!
Bill
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Great prologue to your book, which appears to be very entertaining and magical. looking forward to the first chapter and plan to keep reading.
Write on!
Bill
Comment Written 09-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2019
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Oh, hooray!! ;) You've decided to dive in from the beginning -- glad you're enjoying so far!! ;) :) Thanx in advance for your time, sir! ;) Take care!; ) Yvette
