God
What God does45 total reviews
Comment from Bridge
Well written considering the constraints of the writing prompt. I agree with the basic message of the story. All the best to you.
With regards and best wishes
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Well written considering the constraints of the writing prompt. I agree with the basic message of the story. All the best to you.
With regards and best wishes
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from lyenochka
This is certainly a challenge to create an entire story in thirty worlds and use those nine words. I see you succeeded in creating one sentence that shares the truth that God gives us all we need. Best to you in the contest!
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This is certainly a challenge to create an entire story in thirty worlds and use those nine words. I see you succeeded in creating one sentence that shares the truth that God gives us all we need. Best to you in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2022
Comment from LJbutterfly
It's almost impossible to write a complete thought using only thirty words, but you were successful in writing a thorough description of what God does and does not do. Given all the guidelines, this is well done. Best wishes in the contest.
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It's almost impossible to write a complete thought using only thirty words, but you were successful in writing a thorough description of what God does and does not do. Given all the guidelines, this is well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
Comment from Pangalactic
Very strong, almost explosive, short poem you've crafted here pertaining to your thoughts on the power God holds. Well done, a fine candidate for the contest
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Very strong, almost explosive, short poem you've crafted here pertaining to your thoughts on the power God holds. Well done, a fine candidate for the contest
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write, and I enjoyed the clarification here that you have made about God's intention, you fulfilled the brief for the contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x
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A poignant write, and I enjoyed the clarification here that you have made about God's intention, you fulfilled the brief for the contest and I wish you luck, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading your wee story. You did a good job with the prompt. Your word count is exact. I would imagine with the constraints it was tricky to tell a complete. story. You managed to do just that.
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I enjoyed reading your wee story. You did a good job with the prompt. Your word count is exact. I would imagine with the constraints it was tricky to tell a complete. story. You managed to do just that.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
Comment from amahra
God is so wonderful, Holy, and Perfect, it's not easy summing Him up in thirty words; but for the sake of the contest, your entry is great. I also loved that famous artwork. I believe it's, Angelo and hope I didn't spell it incorrectly.
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God is so wonderful, Holy, and Perfect, it's not easy summing Him up in thirty words; but for the sake of the contest, your entry is great. I also loved that famous artwork. I believe it's, Angelo and hope I didn't spell it incorrectly.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a beautiful piece. The thought of God rejecting demands from man, rather he supplies support and a helping hand when it is deserved. I wish you much success with the contest.
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This is a beautiful piece. The thought of God rejecting demands from man, rather he supplies support and a helping hand when it is deserved. I wish you much success with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
I see that this entry is the only one and it's your contest. I doubt you will get another entry as nine of the thirty words are already decided, the restrictions are too byzantine to encourage anyone. Lastly, the fee is too costly. Fifteen bucks? No way.
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I see that this entry is the only one and it's your contest. I doubt you will get another entry as nine of the thirty words are already decided, the restrictions are too byzantine to encourage anyone. Lastly, the fee is too costly. Fifteen bucks? No way.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
Comment from Yardier
Most excellent synopsis of God's gifts to man. He gives us the desires of our heart; the holy desires. We pray for stuff and lament when the Corvette does not appear in our driveway. But, when tragedy arrives, God gives us hope and compassion.
Thank you for your heart and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Most excellent synopsis of God's gifts to man. He gives us the desires of our heart; the holy desires. We pray for stuff and lament when the Corvette does not appear in our driveway. But, when tragedy arrives, God gives us hope and compassion.
Thank you for your heart and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2022
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Thank you for this fair, wise and professional review.
