Willing Hearts
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Comment from patcelaw
this is a very well written chapter for your book and it moves along very well when it read aloud. I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your sentence structure your paragraph and your overall presentation is very well done that you have a good day and may you also have a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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this is a very well written chapter for your book and it moves along very well when it read aloud. I enjoyed very much listening to it. Your sentence structure your paragraph and your overall presentation is very well done that you have a good day and may you also have a very merry Christmas. Patricia.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
I'm glad that you took care of that situation quickly. Deloris was a good addition. Will she be appearing again? I thought things might get serious between Noah and Sami, but I guess not yet.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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I'm glad that you took care of that situation quickly. Deloris was a good addition. Will she be appearing again? I thought things might get serious between Noah and Sami, but I guess not yet.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Deloris does not appear again. Maybe I need to change that. I'll think about it. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Jealousy can ruin a relationship quicker than just about anything, but yet it's hard not to be a little jealous hearted if you truly care about someone. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
I told the driver if (he) came to my apartment, . . .
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Jealousy can ruin a relationship quicker than just about anything, but yet it's hard not to be a little jealous hearted if you truly care about someone. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
I told the driver if (he) came to my apartment, . . .
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the catch. I have a horrible habit of leaving out those small words. I appreciate the help.
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We all do those things, me much more than most. I don't usually point them out, but that one was so little it's easy to read right over it. :-)
Comment from estory
The meat and potatoes of this chapter is this tension between Sami and Noah, as she catches him embracing another woman, in what blows up into a misunderstanding. She is working to get past here jealousy, and she forgives him as he explains the situation. The wedding bells seem inevitable, at this point. They have kind of cemented their relationship and gotten past a lot of tense moments and difficult situations. The foundation is laid. estory
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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The meat and potatoes of this chapter is this tension between Sami and Noah, as she catches him embracing another woman, in what blows up into a misunderstanding. She is working to get past here jealousy, and she forgives him as he explains the situation. The wedding bells seem inevitable, at this point. They have kind of cemented their relationship and gotten past a lot of tense moments and difficult situations. The foundation is laid. estory
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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It's building up to the wedding, but things still need to be put in place and loose ends need tying up.
Comment from jim vecchio
I enjoyed this very much. I knew Noah was faithful, but I was kind of hoping the explanation to his actions would be dragged out till the next chapter. Anyhow, I hate to see your work end, but I'll be waiting till the next chapter.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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I enjoyed this very much. I knew Noah was faithful, but I was kind of hoping the explanation to his actions would be dragged out till the next chapter. Anyhow, I hate to see your work end, but I'll be waiting till the next chapter.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I would have been just like Sami if I'd been her. Noah does seem to put himself into some difficult positions, and being half naked with a women in his arms was one of them. Lol. Well at least he made sure she would listen to him, and now they are fine again. I wouldn't mind one of those wrist communicators. It sounds fun. Well done, Barbara, another nice chapter. :)) Sandra xxx
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I would have been just like Sami if I'd been her. Noah does seem to put himself into some difficult positions, and being half naked with a women in his arms was one of them. Lol. Well at least he made sure she would listen to him, and now they are fine again. I wouldn't mind one of those wrist communicators. It sounds fun. Well done, Barbara, another nice chapter. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
Sami is certainly one to jump to conclusions, as she did when she saw the woman with Noah. It's a sign she's still not very mature. I think this could be a problem for someone like Noah to handle. Also, she didn't have her purse and couldn't pay the taxi. Noah had to come to her rescue. Let's see a more mature Sami! I'm glad she'll get to see Amber. The wrist communicator sounds interesting. Great work. judi
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Sami is certainly one to jump to conclusions, as she did when she saw the woman with Noah. It's a sign she's still not very mature. I think this could be a problem for someone like Noah to handle. Also, she didn't have her purse and couldn't pay the taxi. Noah had to come to her rescue. Let's see a more mature Sami! I'm glad she'll get to see Amber. The wrist communicator sounds interesting. Great work. judi
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're very welcome. You might put Sami in a situation where she shows she trusts Noah without going through so much doubt, to show her character has grown and matured. Just my thinking. judi
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You're very welcome. You might put Sami in a situation where she shows she trusts Noah without going through so much doubt, to show her character has grown and matured. Just my thinking. judi
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You're very welcome. You might put Sami in a situation where she shows she trusts Noah without going through so much doubt, to show her character has grown and matured. Just my thinking. judi
Comment from Begin Again
This is another good chapter, Barbara. Sami just seems to be in the wrong place at the wrong time with Noah and now the taxi driver, too. Noah needs to put a ring on her finger, and maybe then she'll quit jumping to conclusions.
Refresh my memory--who is Amber Mills? She's not on the list of characters, and I don't recall at the moment.
smiles, Carol
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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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This is another good chapter, Barbara. Sami just seems to be in the wrong place at the wrong time with Noah and now the taxi driver, too. Noah needs to put a ring on her finger, and maybe then she'll quit jumping to conclusions.
Refresh my memory--who is Amber Mills? She's not on the list of characters, and I don't recall at the moment.
smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. Amber was the lady who grew up in house and her finance fought in Viet Nam and died. She was pregnant. Sami found out about her with the puzzle box.
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed another chapter which had a comic misunderstanding with Noah and an embarrassing episode with the taxi driver. I'm glad they have made up again and all is well. Noah is bossy but he Sami is hard to control.
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I enjoyed another chapter which had a comic misunderstanding with Noah and an embarrassing episode with the taxi driver. I'm glad they have made up again and all is well. Noah is bossy but he Sami is hard to control.
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Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Poor Sami, to catch the handsome Noah in another woman's arms!! He needs to put a ring on that finger quickly!!
I love the romance and the interplay between your characters.
Here are two spags I thought you might want to address. That's all I saw.
Hugs,
Rhonda
"Probably but I should've trusted him." ~ I think you need a comma after probably.
Again, need a comma after Today. "Today pulled pork. Mine changes."
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Poor Sami, to catch the handsome Noah in another woman's arms!! He needs to put a ring on that finger quickly!!
I love the romance and the interplay between your characters.
Here are two spags I thought you might want to address. That's all I saw.
Hugs,
Rhonda
"Probably but I should've trusted him." ~ I think you need a comma after probably.
Again, need a comma after Today. "Today pulled pork. Mine changes."
Comment Written 08-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I've made the corrections. Thank you for the catches.
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Sure, you are always careful to help me look for them, too. It doesn't matter how many times we go over our post, something invariably shows up.
