Unconditionally
Five-Seven Five27 total reviews
Comment from royowen
There's one thing that is obvious I think that the cross is decidedly central to all of history, the connection between Heaven and earth, this is beautifully Württemberg D&V, well done, great post, blessings Roy
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There's one thing that is obvious I think that the cross is decidedly central to all of history, the connection between Heaven and earth, this is beautifully Württemberg D&V, well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Roy.
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My pleasure
Comment from Brenda Strauser
How true these words are. The world needs God. I like the words: the ultimate gift No other gift can compare. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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How true these words are. The world needs God. I like the words: the ultimate gift No other gift can compare. I enjoyed reading this. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Brenda, so much your review is very kind.
Comment from nomi338
No one who has ever lived on Earth as a human being has ever given more or given for a higher reason. So many want to invoke the name of Jesus for whatever reason. They do not realize that when they do this for nefarious reasons they do a disservice to him and will one day soon have to pay a serious price for this disrespect.
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No one who has ever lived on Earth as a human being has ever given more or given for a higher reason. So many want to invoke the name of Jesus for whatever reason. They do not realize that when they do this for nefarious reasons they do a disservice to him and will one day soon have to pay a serious price for this disrespect.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Nomi.
Comment from Wendy G
Well said in a few short words, but a very powerful message, as a gift cannot be earned by good works. His sacrifice for us showed both the Source of all love, and its uncnditional quality. Best wisehs for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Well said in a few short words, but a very powerful message, as a gift cannot be earned by good works. His sacrifice for us showed both the Source of all love, and its uncnditional quality. Best wisehs for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Wendy, your review is very kind.
Comment from ESOSTINE
The poem is presents a universal knowledge of the unconditional love that God has for humanity, the premise upon which His only son died for our sins. You did a good work here, meeting the 5-7-5 contest requirements. Well done, dear DonandVicki. Remain blessed.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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The poem is presents a universal knowledge of the unconditional love that God has for humanity, the premise upon which His only son died for our sins. You did a good work here, meeting the 5-7-5 contest requirements. Well done, dear DonandVicki. Remain blessed.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much your review is very kind.
Comment from SimianSavant
Yup this meets the syllable requirements for the contest. I think you could do a bit more with this though. How about a different and larger font? And add some punctuation? No disrespect but there are a million of entries like this in contests all the time, and we literally just got past Christmas. The Epiphany was only yesterday. I'm not quite ready for Baby Jesus to be killed off when Fat Tuesday is still weeks away. But yeah if you're gonna do it, do it right, and make your piece stand out. Big bold font. Maybe Impact or Alfa Slab One or something, and use some blood red for the text on a black background or vice versa. Good luck!
-Harambe the Gorilla, who also died for your sins, but actually becuase of them, and not as substitutionary atonement.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Yup this meets the syllable requirements for the contest. I think you could do a bit more with this though. How about a different and larger font? And add some punctuation? No disrespect but there are a million of entries like this in contests all the time, and we literally just got past Christmas. The Epiphany was only yesterday. I'm not quite ready for Baby Jesus to be killed off when Fat Tuesday is still weeks away. But yeah if you're gonna do it, do it right, and make your piece stand out. Big bold font. Maybe Impact or Alfa Slab One or something, and use some blood red for the text on a black background or vice versa. Good luck!
-Harambe the Gorilla, who also died for your sins, but actually becuase of them, and not as substitutionary atonement.
🦍
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, filled with truth and are creative.
For me this three line poem says it all! When I hear or see the word
unconditional I always think of love! The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork goes well with these words.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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The author's words are engaging, filled with truth and are creative.
For me this three line poem says it all! When I hear or see the word
unconditional I always think of love! The poem flows and connects
well. The artwork goes well with these words.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Harmony.
