Brown Bear
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Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Cecilia.
I think you have accurately depicted the thoughts and behaviors of a brown bear in its natural environment. You have detailed both his intentions and his achievements. He is a majestic creature, and he knows how to succeed in his own world. He's quite good at it.
Robert
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Hello Cecilia.
I think you have accurately depicted the thoughts and behaviors of a brown bear in its natural environment. You have detailed both his intentions and his achievements. He is a majestic creature, and he knows how to succeed in his own world. He's quite good at it.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Robert,
Thank you for the wonderful review. Yes the brown bear likes to do his own thing. They really are majestic creatures.
Cecilia
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You're welcome
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a good poem full of colorful imagery and action. Your rhyming is good and carries one bear's story. The photo images support your words well. Best wishes to you, Alex
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This is a good poem full of colorful imagery and action. Your rhyming is good and carries one bear's story. The photo images support your words well. Best wishes to you, Alex
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Alex,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.
Cecilia
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Your welcome, Cecilia!
Comment from Rick Gardner
Love it, your words tell of the wild, the basis of life, eat,eat,eat then sleep. Get up and do it again, winter will come. some may not see tomorrow. All doors open and close. Life is the same.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Love it, your words tell of the wild, the basis of life, eat,eat,eat then sleep. Get up and do it again, winter will come. some may not see tomorrow. All doors open and close. Life is the same.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Rick,
Thank you for the wonderful review. Sounds like the bear has a really good life. LOL. I appreciate you.
Cecilia
Comment from DonandVicki
I like this style of poetry because it deals with the problems, we are facing up North with the wetlands and nature in general. Over population is forcing nature out.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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I like this style of poetry because it deals with the problems, we are facing up North with the wetlands and nature in general. Over population is forcing nature out.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Don,
Thank you for the great review. You know it's happening all over the place. When we moved here six years ago it was nothing bu farmland. Now there's housing all over the place pushing the wildlife into the neighborhoods.
Cecilia
Comment from Angel Debbie
Great write about a bear, my grandson went hunting for a bear and got one it was 350 pounds mind you he just received a gun for his 12th birthday when he shot the bear. It took his dad to get a front-end loader to move the bear. Super write. Enjoyed reading it at least yours got a full belly!
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Great write about a bear, my grandson went hunting for a bear and got one it was 350 pounds mind you he just received a gun for his 12th birthday when he shot the bear. It took his dad to get a front-end loader to move the bear. Super write. Enjoyed reading it at least yours got a full belly!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Debbie,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you. What did your grandson do with the bear?
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They had him skinned and tanned the hide and processed the meat. He was so proud that for Christmas he gave grandpa a picture of him with his bear holding the gun grandpa gave him. Grandpa cried of joy when he opened the present.
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Ooh, that is so sweet of him. Your husband is a big softy isn't he. Do you eat bear?
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No grandson lives in Tennessee, so I don't see him often. He comes up for Christmas. one chistmas he got the gun the next year we got to see the bear
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Wow. I would think shooting a bear would be scary to shoot. You don't really get more than one shot before it charges.
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Well when you live where they live you get to know how they live and where to shoot them. The story he told was fascinating to listen to. And of course he wasn't a bit scared, hie said Dad was more, lol
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So young. He's 10 foot tall and bullet proof.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely written poem about a brown bear and your presentation is very lovely. It flows very well when it is read aloud. One little typo that I might notice as you say Malple tree should it not be maple. Patricia
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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This is a nicely written poem about a brown bear and your presentation is very lovely. It flows very well when it is read aloud. One little typo that I might notice as you say Malple tree should it not be maple. Patricia
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Patricia,
Thank you for the great review. Thank you also for finding my typo.
Cecilia
Comment from TRC
This is a nice ode to the brown bear. You used good wording and modes of description to help the reader create a mental picture throughout the poem. Good job!
TRC
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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This is a nice ode to the brown bear. You used good wording and modes of description to help the reader create a mental picture throughout the poem. Good job!
TRC
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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TRC,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you.
Cecilia
Comment from l.raven
HI Cecilia, I'm so sorry I'm out of sixes
my sweet friend...******...
I love a story with a happy ending....waking
up to a good breakfast...and then a restful
nap under a Maple tree...one a hot day...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love your
picture...so very well written you...love you...Linda xxoo
did you mean Maple tree???
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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HI Cecilia, I'm so sorry I'm out of sixes
my sweet friend...******...
I love a story with a happy ending....waking
up to a good breakfast...and then a restful
nap under a Maple tree...one a hot day...
I love your poem sweet girl...and love your
picture...so very well written you...love you...Linda xxoo
did you mean Maple tree???
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Linda,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I appreciate you. Yes, I did mean maple, my fingers got ahead of my brain.
Cecilia
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Hi Sweet Girl, your so very welcome...
love ya...xxoo 🤗❤️🙏🌼
Comment from Lindsey Russell
A beautiful poem about nature and its beauty. It is very well-written. It was a joy to read. You write wonderful poetry.
Good luck with it and happy writing!
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reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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A beautiful poem about nature and its beauty. It is very well-written. It was a joy to read. You write wonderful poetry.
Good luck with it and happy writing!
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Lindsey,
Thank you for the wonderful review. I apprediate you.
Cecilia
Comment from Begin Again
Eat and sleep...sounds like the good life to me. Just catch you a bath while you're waiting for the fish to jump out of the water, eat it and then back to bed. Good job!
Smiles, Carol
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Eat and sleep...sounds like the good life to me. Just catch you a bath while you're waiting for the fish to jump out of the water, eat it and then back to bed. Good job!
Smiles, Carol
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2025
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Carol,
Thank you my sweet friend for the awesome review. It sounds like the bear has a good life like you say. Eat and sleep, what more is there.
Cecilia
