My Lifetime
Bits and pieces from then till now25 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Excellent autobiographical poem that captures the important parts of your life, God and family first. The smooth flow of your lines makes the poem feel light and has a spiritual feel to it. Love the line "my husband says my love has been unique."
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Excellent autobiographical poem that captures the important parts of your life, God and family first. The smooth flow of your lines makes the poem feel light and has a spiritual feel to it. Love the line "my husband says my love has been unique."
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Mintybee
This is a lovely autobiographical poem. It's you in a nutshell. You covered so much of what builds up to a lifetime in just a few stanzas, and you did it with flair.
Mintybee
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This is a lovely autobiographical poem. It's you in a nutshell. You covered so much of what builds up to a lifetime in just a few stanzas, and you did it with flair.
Mintybee
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, My Lifetime, brings in a lot of subjects that could easily be expanded to a book or two concerning family, health, and God's plac in our lives. Nice.
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This poem, My Lifetime, brings in a lot of subjects that could easily be expanded to a book or two concerning family, health, and God's plac in our lives. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It is a quick trip through your lifetime and you did some amazing things and it's awesome. Amazing things as well and had an amazing family. God bless you and have an another several lines for your Lifetime poem.
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This is very nicely written and I very much enjoyed listening to it. It is a quick trip through your lifetime and you did some amazing things and it's awesome. Amazing things as well and had an amazing family. God bless you and have an another several lines for your Lifetime poem.
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
Comment from Sally Law
Debi dear,
Virtual six for this poetic journal. I visualized each one because that's what I do when I read you. Your brothers and you put frogs down a vent? I had fun with that one!
Love, family and faith in God weaved the fabric of you, my dear! Your hardships and illness has made you more caring and empathetic to others, and has made you the beautiful person you are!
Wonderfully written and illustrated line by line, precious friend.
Love & Blessings always.
Sal XOs
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Debi dear,
Virtual six for this poetic journal. I visualized each one because that's what I do when I read you. Your brothers and you put frogs down a vent? I had fun with that one!
Love, family and faith in God weaved the fabric of you, my dear! Your hardships and illness has made you more caring and empathetic to others, and has made you the beautiful person you are!
Wonderfully written and illustrated line by line, precious friend.
Love & Blessings always.
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 09-Jan-2025
