Vision and Sound: Their Stories
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Comment from seaglass
This prepares us for the coming problems that will develop from the self righteous minister. This young man will be challenged to discern between the truth and dogma.
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This prepares us for the coming problems that will develop from the self righteous minister. This young man will be challenged to discern between the truth and dogma.
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
Comment from Ezra Celestin
Good job mentoring and molding a young man in particular direction. The Priest feared that Gregorio is a powerful man with dangerous thinking and that his education may be all too one-sided. Recognizing this he ask his companion to mentor him into the church.
Nice work
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Good job mentoring and molding a young man in particular direction. The Priest feared that Gregorio is a powerful man with dangerous thinking and that his education may be all too one-sided. Recognizing this he ask his companion to mentor him into the church.
Nice work
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Comment Written 09-Oct-2014
