Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

Excellent. Normally I don't read this kind of stuff but this is different and funny. It is a bit off the wall but I enjoyed every word. I think it is a unique twist for the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2016

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Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

I wonder if the girl will be on his 'nice' list after he's enjoyed being naughty.
I always knew Santa deserved MORE than just milk and cookies!

Everyone should get a laugh out of this. I did.

Great incentive for some role playing.

:) e

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Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Hilarious! I'm hoping this all happened after the little kids' presents had been delivered! Some great rhyming (e.g. whorehouse/ sheer blouse) and the rope "we...um... just found" came in handy! I see that with a bit of Christmas magic even your poem rose to the occasion at one point!

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Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This sounds like Santa's dream Christmas. He was powerless to resist when he saw all the naked beauty before him. I wonder about those gals. If there was no protection available, what could that gift that Santa left them be? A lot of little Baby Clauses? You could probably get this published if you find the right magazine. Excellent details in this about the girls and the elf. I hope Santa didn't forget to make his rounds. He'd have a lot of explaining to do. judi

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Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I think this would be a hit in a Penthouse or Hustler Magazine. A lot of bawdy, racy humor and certainly full of the adult holiday spirit. I wish you well in the contest.

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Comment from nomi338

Excellent

What a naughty tart thou art. This bawdy piece was very pleasing to read and imagine in my jaded old mind. I enjoyed it thoroughly. You may receive a lump of coal for being naughty, but if old Santa has a jolly bone in his body or his pants I am sure he will forgive.

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Comment from William Ross

Exceptional

hahaha, Love it, very good I love good adult humor and this is a really good one, Nice job, Thanks for the share and have a wonderful Christmas.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2016

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