My Book of Favored Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "My Prayer to Thee"My collection of various sonnets.
49 total reviews
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
A good piece of verse,
cleverly thoughtout, with
a smooth flow to the words.
An ideal entry for the contest.
Good luck,
Margaret.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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A good piece of verse,
cleverly thoughtout, with
a smooth flow to the words.
An ideal entry for the contest.
Good luck,
Margaret.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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Thank you, appreciate your comment.
Comment from Minglement
This is a beautiful and moving prayer as well as a poem for the contest. Your mention of the rainbow and waves on the shore, touch on the elements in our inspiration photo. Good job.
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This is a beautiful and moving prayer as well as a poem for the contest. Your mention of the rainbow and waves on the shore, touch on the elements in our inspiration photo. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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Thank you for your lovely words I apreciate the time you took to read and comment.
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You're welcome. It was refreshing and inspiring.
Comment from JILLY
You captured everything in your poetry in art submission. I truely like your take. It is so much along the ideal of what I would have expressed. Well not now, of course. Wonderful tribute to our Lord. God Bless, Jill
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You captured everything in your poetry in art submission. I truely like your take. It is so much along the ideal of what I would have expressed. Well not now, of course. Wonderful tribute to our Lord. God Bless, Jill
Comment Written 12-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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A most generous review, thank you ever so much and God bless as well.
Comment from trudy
This is a beautiful poem and obviously a heart-felt prayer. It is also sad but then prayer often is a reflection of sadness and grief. I found myself joining in your prayer while as a reviewer also acknowledging your poetry skills. trudy
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This is a beautiful poem and obviously a heart-felt prayer. It is also sad but then prayer often is a reflection of sadness and grief. I found myself joining in your prayer while as a reviewer also acknowledging your poetry skills. trudy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2008
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You could not have blessed me more, for it is joining in the prayer that I seek more than acknowledgement of the poetry skills. I thank you and God bless you always.
Comment from rmdelta
Dawn of Tomorrow,
What a fantastic prayer for guidance written with such a gentle spirit, such grace. Beautifully worded stanzas flowing so gently one into the next and what a wonderful message contained within the fantastic words within the stanzas. So very well done, Dawn of Tomorrow.
Reggie
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Dawn of Tomorrow,
What a fantastic prayer for guidance written with such a gentle spirit, such grace. Beautifully worded stanzas flowing so gently one into the next and what a wonderful message contained within the fantastic words within the stanzas. So very well done, Dawn of Tomorrow.
Reggie
Comment Written 12-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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Thank you for such a lovely review, gave me a warm feeling this morning.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very good contest entry you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and your wording goes well with the picture. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
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This is a very good contest entry you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and your wording goes well with the picture. Good luck in the contest. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 12-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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Thank you Teri I appreciate you words and taking the time to read.
Comment from nancyjam
This is a beautiful prayer-poem. Well crafted
with good rhyme and meter. a great entry in
this contest. I wish you the best.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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This is a beautiful prayer-poem. Well crafted
with good rhyme and meter. a great entry in
this contest. I wish you the best.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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Thank you for having taken the time to read and leave such a thoughtful review.
Comment from honeytree
We need stacks of prayers and good deeds to be done unto others instead of the hate and greedy attitude within our world. I hope God can change the minds of men to become more peaceful within this earth.
"It would be lovely calling everyone friends.)
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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We need stacks of prayers and good deeds to be done unto others instead of the hate and greedy attitude within our world. I hope God can change the minds of men to become more peaceful within this earth.
"It would be lovely calling everyone friends.)
Honeytree.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2008
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That it would be, thank you for taking the time with this prayer.
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I am so glad to have helped you.Honeytree.
Comment from Joan E.
A fine response to the picture in the form of a prayer.
I enjoyed the words you used to enhance the feelings: waves...brush, mountain strong, clutch.
You chose a good title and background color.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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A fine response to the picture in the form of a prayer.
I enjoyed the words you used to enhance the feelings: waves...brush, mountain strong, clutch.
You chose a good title and background color.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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Thank you Joan for taking the time to read and review.
Comment from skye
A prayer of hope, coupled with the beauty of the contest picture, creates a memorable poem.
Your images are strong, and your message is very clear.
We do need Him to watch over all of us.
Very well done.
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A prayer of hope, coupled with the beauty of the contest picture, creates a memorable poem.
Your images are strong, and your message is very clear.
We do need Him to watch over all of us.
Very well done.
Comment Written 11-Nov-2008
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2008
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Yes we certainly do thank you for taking the time to read and for your gracious words.
