Comment from Carol D Parker

Excellent

This is very good. I couldn't figure if the guy is alive or deceased, which is the attraction to the poem. Lovely command of the language. Beautifully written. I guess he's deceased because of the contest prompt. Very good.
Delora

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the terrific review and kind comments. Yes. He died awhile ago.

Comment from Rachon

Excellent

Skye,
I know very little about golf and I'm amazed that you were able to write so many lines that flowed smoothly. You really did a great job.
Yours,
Rachon

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the terrific review and kind comments.

Comment from FredCollingwood

Excellent

I know exactly how this feels. I played eighteen holes today. I usuall play early so I feel the different temperatures of the day. Great poem!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the terrific review and kind comments.

Comment from Terror2s

Excellent

This is a very nice poem. I wonder if you came with golf too? How nice that you are supportive to your spouse's/ significant other's hobby. Terror

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the terrific review and kind comments.

Comment from The Rivaling Mimic

Excellent

wELL, I found this to be a great entry and one that should gain you props from any reviewer that passes this way. I am most definite you will do well in the contest.

The Rivaling Mimic

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2009

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2009

Thanks for the terrific review and kind comments.