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Tired Mama

A mom is always tired because her kids keep her up.

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest and a good first post. Welcome to Fanstory! Every mother can relate to this poem. Referring to the mother as mama bear adds a charm to the piece. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024

Comment from JanPerry
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I don't have any kids but I'm sure they keep mums awake with their noise. It's up to mamma bear to roar at her cubs and get them sorted. A true message.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2024