Ben Paul Persons
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Comment from Jim Wile
An enjoyable chapter. So, Ben Paul and Sylvia can't seem to find a straightaway route home without some stops and adventures along the way. Oh well, keeps life interesting. You've got me curious about what could have been in that bank teller's drawer. I have a feeling it will be significant in the next chapter.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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An enjoyable chapter. So, Ben Paul and Sylvia can't seem to find a straightaway route home without some stops and adventures along the way. Oh well, keeps life interesting. You've got me curious about what could have been in that bank teller's drawer. I have a feeling it will be significant in the next chapter.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your very nice review. I appreciate it.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Of all the things that could have happened at the bank that morning, no one would have ever suspected a robbery. Most people don't, but it could happen at any time when we stop to do business. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Of all the things that could have happened at the bank that morning, no one would have ever suspected a robbery. Most people don't, but it could happen at any time when we stop to do business. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your very nice review. I appreciate your stopping by.
smiley face here
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Normally, Bible verse are written in numerals, not letters. Romans twelve: twelve would be Romans 12:12. A sentence like "... Romans, chapter five beginning with the first verse." This is different, but correct.
Now we're all wondering what is in the heavy canvas satchel, which may have been what the robbers were really after.
Have a good week, Wayne.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Normally, Bible verse are written in numerals, not letters. Romans twelve: twelve would be Romans 12:12. A sentence like "... Romans, chapter five beginning with the first verse." This is different, but correct.
Now we're all wondering what is in the heavy canvas satchel, which may have been what the robbers were really after.
Have a good week, Wayne.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you. I try to write dialogue as true as I can. 12:12 just didn't seem right.
Stay warm. We're getting a cold blast even here in central Arkansas from the northern storm.
Comment from Wendy G
Suffering, trials and afflictions are a part of the Christian life, and many believers worldwide experience enormous and dreadful persecution. Yet He uses such things to draw us closer to Himself and to teach us patience in this present life and a strong focus on being with Him soon. Well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Suffering, trials and afflictions are a part of the Christian life, and many believers worldwide experience enormous and dreadful persecution. Yet He uses such things to draw us closer to Himself and to teach us patience in this present life and a strong focus on being with Him soon. Well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Thank you. Millionaire preachers can't possibly be reading the same New Testament I do. I appreciate your very nice review.
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I agree. Selective reading, at best.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
The subsequent transition to the couple's historical reflection adds depth to their journey, as Sylvia's fascination with the Santa Fe Trail intertwines with their decision to detour through Independence. The dialogue is natural and engaging, showcasing their deep connection and shared curiosity about the past. The mention of wagon ruts in Santa Fe Park subtly ties their present journey to the historical struggles of early pioneers, reinforcing the chapter's overarching themes of resilience and exploration.
Overall, this chapter is a poignant blend of spiritual encouragement and historical curiosity, providing both inspiration and a sense of adventure.
We like to hike, too and hiked in Machu Picchu and Southern France recently.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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The subsequent transition to the couple's historical reflection adds depth to their journey, as Sylvia's fascination with the Santa Fe Trail intertwines with their decision to detour through Independence. The dialogue is natural and engaging, showcasing their deep connection and shared curiosity about the past. The mention of wagon ruts in Santa Fe Park subtly ties their present journey to the historical struggles of early pioneers, reinforcing the chapter's overarching themes of resilience and exploration.
Overall, this chapter is a poignant blend of spiritual encouragement and historical curiosity, providing both inspiration and a sense of adventure.
We like to hike, too and hiked in Machu Picchu and Southern France recently.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025
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Wow! Great that you can get to the exotic hikes.
Thank you for your terrific review. You have perfectly captured my soul.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Ben Paul and Sylvia may be short on money, but they are never short on finding interesting new situations. Fortunately, no one tried to be a hero, and the robbers got away, but not with all the money.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Ben Paul and Sylvia may be short on money, but they are never short on finding interesting new situations. Fortunately, no one tried to be a hero, and the robbers got away, but not with all the money.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Unfortunately, trouble might follow.
Comment from jim vecchio
I was just thinking how I'd love to take that trip with Ben and Sylvia. Then, the robbers came. And thanks for another sermon. This is one of the best on the site. Hope you continue with the sermons.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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I was just thinking how I'd love to take that trip with Ben and Sylvia. Then, the robbers came. And thanks for another sermon. This is one of the best on the site. Hope you continue with the sermons.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you. I read your review to my wife, Debbie. We both are blessed by your kind words. thank you.
And thank you for the six stars!
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I feel so good to be considered a blessing. Thank You!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed how you built the tension in this chapter. The way you described the quiet moments mixed with the sudden rush of danger really pulled me in. I loved how Sylvia's personality added to the bank robbery -
it felt natural. Ben Paul's calmness (even when faced with a gun) is great and made me root for him. I'm looking forward to reading more of this!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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I really enjoyed how you built the tension in this chapter. The way you described the quiet moments mixed with the sudden rush of danger really pulled me in. I loved how Sylvia's personality added to the bank robbery -
it felt natural. Ben Paul's calmness (even when faced with a gun) is great and made me root for him. I'm looking forward to reading more of this!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2025
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Thank you. I truly appreciate your great review.
