Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

Your wife has a good sense of humor. This is written well. There are some issues like the sound should be the same not just the letter (as with the soft c and the hard c). But most importantly, as a reader, I enjoyed reading this and viewing your very colorful, lovely presentation. Best wishes to you, Alex

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025

I don't know what is meant by hard and soft c. Thanks ahywho. Tom

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 06-Jan-2025

(K) Cow hard (s)Circle soft
Guest hard (j) giant soft
I've taught for decades sorry. As I know it alliteration is sound, not just a certain letter, itself. I also have my masters in Literacy so I can't help being a nerd. I wanted to help.

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Aah. The light bulb lit up on me. I see.
Thank you.

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 07-Jan-2025

😊

reply by the author on 07-Jan-2025

Thanks. I never knew there were hard and soft sounds to identify. Another FS pointed how.

reply by Alexandra Trovato on 07-Jan-2025

You're welcome. I learned more way later too. I was in college classes thinking "You're kidding. THAT'S how to use a semi colon!" I was in shock daily ha That's why I share whatever I can. ;)

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi
This is a cute poem that follows most of the rules. The last line doesn't follow the rhyme scheme. It should rhyme with abounds.
Good luck with the prompt.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a good day.
Joan

 Comment Written 06-Jan-2025

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reply by the author on 06-Jan-2025

Yikes. I was under pressure. Will try to fix. Thanks.

reply by dragonpoet on 06-Jan-2025

I sometimes feel that way too, when I try new forms with strict guidelines.
You're welcome.
Joan