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Donald J. Trump Meets the Lord

A bit of historical fiction

7 total reviews 
Comment from Thesis
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Wow, wouldn't that be an extraordinary change of course. Despite being totally unrealistic, it would be truly welcomed. I like where you were going here, but based on the recent convictions, Trump has vowed to continue to deny any guilt for his actions. In my opinion, all is lost with this deviant.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025

Comment from Wendy G
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That was a clever piece. If he did become a born-again Christian perhaps he could still lead, but with humility and grace and mercy. These attributes would show the extent of his transformation!
Wendy

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    I had the same mind set for Osama bin Ladin. What if he had a life-changing salvation experience? Or Putin?
    Trump, with such a low IQ and his inability to recognize intelligence... It would have to be a healing miracle as well as a saving miracle.
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Sorry. I completely failed to thank you for your very kind review
reply by Wendy G on 10-Jan-2025
    Lol. No problem. I was thinking of your story while out walking just now. Trump is clever in thinking up schemes, but that is not a sign of intelligence. As for wisdom, zero. The fear of the Lord is the beginning of wisdom. Aspiration to greatness is so contrary to all the Scriptures say about greatness. Fortunately we have God's Word for clarity as to things happening right now.
Comment from jim vecchio
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I did not give this the reading it deserved. Sorry. I haven't been feeling too well the last few days, so I may miss some of your posts. I apologize and will try to do better. Your words are important.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Thank you. I pray for a quick recovery.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Interesting and well written. I noticed Obama contunually engaging witn Trump at President Carter's funeral. I was looking to see if Trump would go up in flames. These spiritually diverse people on our county's public stage right now can not be ignored. It's a something as one of my favorite comedians, Paul Riser , would say. Good work! Now we watch the convicted felon take office. :( Alex

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Sadly (the convicted felon)
    Thank you for reviewing.
reply by Alexandra Trovato on 10-Jan-2025
    You're welcome. Yes, sadly. I'm sure God tried to stop it but humans have free will. Also sadly.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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I have never wanted fiction to turn into fact so much in my life! I can't even imagine those words coming from his mouth but it's nice to think about and pretend. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    You made my day! My wife and I love you.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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The way you portrayed Trump's journey from skepticism to belief felt real. The interactions between him and Obama were well done. I thought you did a good job with Obama's calm and gentle guidance. That really stood out to me. Great job.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Can you imagine a heartfelt conversion?
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Can you imagine a heartfelt conversion?
    Thank you immensely for the positive feedback.
Comment from Elias Noor
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This is a compelling and imaginative story that mixes political drama with spiritual transformation in a way that is both surprising and engaging. With some refinements in pacing and deeper exploration of character motivations, this narrative could become even more impactful. It presents a bold "what-if" scenario that challenges the reader to think about redemption, leadership, and the unpredictable nature of human change.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2025


reply by the author on 10-Jan-2025
    Thank you.
    I intended for it as a mere flashpoint fiction, just to get the hope from fingers to paper. I figured the characters and their motivations were familiar enough.