Unconditionally
Five-Seven Five27 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
HI D & V.
This poem is short and to the point. It tells the main theme of Christianity, the birth, life and death of Jesus saves believers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a nice rest of the week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or just search Joan Pechter The Interloper on Amazon.com.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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HI D & V.
This poem is short and to the point. It tells the main theme of Christianity, the birth, life and death of Jesus saves believers.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a nice rest of the week.
Joan
P S I would like you to know that I recently published a book titled, "The Interloper and other stories in prose and poetry". It is available on Amazon.com. There is a link to it at the bottom of my profile page or just search Joan Pechter The Interloper on Amazon.com.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much, Joan, for the kind and meaningful review.
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You are most kindly welcome, D&V
Joan
Comment from mermaids
You have written an excellent faith based 5-7-5 poem that captures how God's love is unconditional for us. Short poems are a challenge to create but you did well here with a spiritual poem. It is a theme we need to be reminded of from time to time.
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You have written an excellent faith based 5-7-5 poem that captures how God's love is unconditional for us. Short poems are a challenge to create but you did well here with a spiritual poem. It is a theme we need to be reminded of from time to time.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much for the kind and meaningful review.
Comment from Mintybee
This is a very succinct sum up of Jesus' mission on earth. Each line in this 5-7-5 is strong. You use specific and meaningful words well.
Mintybee
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This is a very succinct sum up of Jesus' mission on earth. Each line in this 5-7-5 is strong. You use specific and meaningful words well.
Mintybee
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much for your generous review.
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Don.
Your sentiment, and words in this poem are beautiful. You reflect the meaning of Isaiah 53: 5. Your 5-7-5 is certainly well thought out and written. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
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Hello Don.
Your sentiment, and words in this poem are beautiful. You reflect the meaning of Isaiah 53: 5. Your 5-7-5 is certainly well thought out and written. I wish you good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Robert, so very much for the kind and meaningful review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a truthful 5-7-5 for the contest. I like the message on the cross in the picture. It's the title of an old hymn we used to sing. Thanks for the reminder of God's unconditional love for each of us. Blessings & best wishes in the contest. Carol
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This is a truthful 5-7-5 for the contest. I like the message on the cross in the picture. It's the title of an old hymn we used to sing. Thanks for the reminder of God's unconditional love for each of us. Blessings & best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Your reviews are so kind, Carol.
Comment from Darlene BoClair
As we read and study the Bible we learn truth. Truth allows all to experience His unconditional love.
Your 5-7-5 poetry contest entry embraces His gift.
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As we read and study the Bible we learn truth. Truth allows all to experience His unconditional love.
Your 5-7-5 poetry contest entry embraces His gift.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so very much for the generous review.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
DonandVicki,
This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. Jesus did indeed pay the ultimate price to wash away our sins. His mother Mary must have been sad to see that.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
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DonandVicki,
This is a lovely 5-7-5 poem. Jesus did indeed pay the ultimate price to wash away our sins. His mother Mary must have been sad to see that.
Well done and good luck in the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Cecilia, so very much for the kind and meaningful review.
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You're welcome my friends.
Comment from shad blunt
You have said it all brother. No need to reply on anything, thank you for the reminder, that when I feel lost today. All I need to do is humble myself with all prays and guidance that he has provided for me.
May we always walk with grace and love to find kind words to share with another.
Peace brother,
SHADRACH
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You have said it all brother. No need to reply on anything, thank you for the reminder, that when I feel lost today. All I need to do is humble myself with all prays and guidance that he has provided for me.
May we always walk with grace and love to find kind words to share with another.
Peace brother,
SHADRACH
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you, Shad, so very much for the kind and meaningful review.
Comment from Tim Margetts
Simple, honest, truth, Don and Vicki.
And all we can do is thank Him for it.
Out of curiosity, who is the writer, or do you both write?
Thanks for sharing
Tim
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Simple, honest, truth, Don and Vicki.
And all we can do is thank Him for it.
Out of curiosity, who is the writer, or do you both write?
Thanks for sharing
Tim
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Tim, your review is very kind.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A strong and equally unconditional post that's inspired by your strong faith. The visual is eye-catching and your 5-7-5, which complies fully with the prompt, couldn't match it better. Well done and good luck! Debbie
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A strong and equally unconditional post that's inspired by your strong faith. The visual is eye-catching and your 5-7-5, which complies fully with the prompt, couldn't match it better. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you so much, Debbie, your review is very kind.
