Woodlands Sounds
A bit of a different format18 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I doubt you will ever be prey for wolves. There howl is scary and mysterious. I have seen and heard a pack of wolves on a wintery night. They are scary. I was in a house looking out a window.
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. I doubt you will ever be prey for wolves. There howl is scary and mysterious. I have seen and heard a pack of wolves on a wintery night. They are scary. I was in a house looking out a window.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for reading it and reviewing my work I appreciate it
Comment from Mintybee
The description is strong in this poem. The alliteration at the beginning is a really good start as the soft w sounds keeps the poem in a hushed tone. It ends with a chilling question. Nice!
Mintybee
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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The description is strong in this poem. The alliteration at the beginning is a really good start as the soft w sounds keeps the poem in a hushed tone. It ends with a chilling question. Nice!
Mintybee
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It's very appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Every poet is entitled to write their poems in whatever way they want. We all play with syllables, rhymes and metre. Here you created a unique nature poem and the wolves howl, but they rarely harm humans. I enjoyed your fine words Patricia, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Every poet is entitled to write their poems in whatever way they want. We all play with syllables, rhymes and metre. Here you created a unique nature poem and the wolves howl, but they rarely harm humans. I enjoyed your fine words Patricia, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your nice review.
Comment from RJ Heritage
Interesting format, show off your creativity. Well. It's fine once you don't become their next meal. Thankbyou for sharing
I hope you're having a blessed day.
RJ
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Interesting format, show off your creativity. Well. It's fine once you don't become their next meal. Thankbyou for sharing
I hope you're having a blessed day.
RJ
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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With gratitude of my heart, I wish to thank you for a very much For a very nice review
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Patricia,
Another lovely nature poem. I think wolves are one of my favorite creatures. They are scary, but they are majestic creatures.
Well done my sweet friend.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Patricia,
Another lovely nature poem. I think wolves are one of my favorite creatures. They are scary, but they are majestic creatures.
Well done my sweet friend.
Cecilia
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I am always grateful when I get nice reviews like this
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You're welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem did a great job of sharing the feeling of winter in the woods. The word choices of "winter winds whisper" creates a chilling feeling right from the start. The fear in your words - "chills of fear down my back" - adds a nice tense touch. I especially liked the way you ended with the question, "wondering if I'll be the feast they want". It's a great way to stir emotions with just a few lines! Great work!
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Your poem did a great job of sharing the feeling of winter in the woods. The word choices of "winter winds whisper" creates a chilling feeling right from the start. The fear in your words - "chills of fear down my back" - adds a nice tense touch. I especially liked the way you ended with the question, "wondering if I'll be the feast they want". It's a great way to stir emotions with just a few lines! Great work!
Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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I am so pleased that you stop by and read my work and left such a nice review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
Morning, Patricia. I enjoyed your exploration into syllable count. I need to do more of that. I particularly liked your "sound of wolves." That sound sends chills down my back as well. I've never been around wolves. My fear must be something that I inherited from ancestors who lived in the woods. I also enjoyed your use of alliteration.
Nice job, my friend.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Morning, Patricia. I enjoyed your exploration into syllable count. I need to do more of that. I particularly liked your "sound of wolves." That sound sends chills down my back as well. I've never been around wolves. My fear must be something that I inherited from ancestors who lived in the woods. I also enjoyed your use of alliteration.
Nice job, my friend.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for the thoughtful review. It is much appreciate.
Comment from Bill Schott
This diamante poem, Woodlands Sounds, has the proper formatting and ponders the dire meaning of wolfen calls. Is it the pack on its way off, or on its way in.
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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This diamante poem, Woodlands Sounds, has the proper formatting and ponders the dire meaning of wolfen calls. Is it the pack on its way off, or on its way in.
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2025
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Thank you for your review. When I looked it up on the Internet it says that diamanté format has seven lines. My version of it has nine lines
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Diamante has a diamond shape regardless of lines.
