Dr. Howler's Nightmares
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Comment from Cindy Warren
But didn't nasty policemen with guns ever come looking for the missing guests? LOL Great story. It made me laugh on a rainy Saturday afternoon.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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But didn't nasty policemen with guns ever come looking for the missing guests? LOL Great story. It made me laugh on a rainy Saturday afternoon.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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If they had of they would have been a snack. Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from boxergirl
Okay...not my favorite kind of bedtime story, Brett. Lol
But it certainly fits in the horror category. I am glad dinos we're not this caniving or they might still be around.
Karen :-)
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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Okay...not my favorite kind of bedtime story, Brett. Lol
But it certainly fits in the horror category. I am glad dinos we're not this caniving or they might still be around.
Karen :-)
Comment Written 20-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2015
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The inspiration for this little tale is still around. Appreciate your comments and support.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
You sure keep coming up with some great little stores. You have a great imagination that's for sure. Lately I haven't been able to write anything.
Kat
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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Hi Brett,
You sure keep coming up with some great little stores. You have a great imagination that's for sure. Lately I haven't been able to write anything.
Kat
Comment Written 20-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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Writer's Block. That strange little animal we all suffer from occasionally. Appreciate your comments and support.
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My right ear and bottom teeth ache constantly, keeping me from thinking. I'll probably have to have my teeth pulled.
Comment from royowen
I must admit I was a little taken aback by this one! At first I thought it a human, the narrator of the story, has a little giggle at the toes instance, and was suitably horrified by the rest! A little different from the normal plot, but certainly a unique one. Well written, I am still "digesting" what you wrote Brett! Well done, blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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I must admit I was a little taken aback by this one! At first I thought it a human, the narrator of the story, has a little giggle at the toes instance, and was suitably horrified by the rest! A little different from the normal plot, but certainly a unique one. Well written, I am still "digesting" what you wrote Brett! Well done, blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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Thank you for your comments. Really appreciate it very much. Just something to have a little fun with.
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Most welcome
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
YOU WERE INJUred as a child, right? Let me guess, you ran your imagination into a tree.
This is priceless.
Very nicely done but definitely not a child's story for bedtime reading.
Very nice
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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YOU WERE INJUred as a child, right? Let me guess, you ran your imagination into a tree.
This is priceless.
Very nicely done but definitely not a child's story for bedtime reading.
Very nice
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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Aw, a bedtime story was what I was after. Should scare the little buggers real good! Thanks for your comments and support.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi Brett,
Another odd little tale for your book here.
Very quirky. It could do with a little more punctuation, some of the longer sentences could do with the insertion of some commas.
forgotten land that no longer exist - exists
only been a rouge - a ruse
And if that didn't scare them bad enough, as it always did - I would consider removing 'as it always did' because if this was the case then there would be no need to wave their scalps.
divided his guests bodies - divided his guest's bodies
and a part of his torture routine he especially delighted in - and was a
Once these parts were removed George continued his dissections working up the body with the toes - this is not working up the bodies perhaps up the body from the toes rather than with.
All the best
GMG
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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Hi Brett,
Another odd little tale for your book here.
Very quirky. It could do with a little more punctuation, some of the longer sentences could do with the insertion of some commas.
forgotten land that no longer exist - exists
only been a rouge - a ruse
And if that didn't scare them bad enough, as it always did - I would consider removing 'as it always did' because if this was the case then there would be no need to wave their scalps.
divided his guests bodies - divided his guest's bodies
and a part of his torture routine he especially delighted in - and was a
Once these parts were removed George continued his dissections working up the body with the toes - this is not working up the bodies perhaps up the body from the toes rather than with.
All the best
GMG
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2015
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Noted. Appreciate your comments.
