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Dr. Howler's Nightmares

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A collection of most unusual bedtime stories

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Comment from barkingdog
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I'm glad that I had a good night's sleep and don't plan to take a nap any time soon. lol
Your sure can write a creepy first person POV, Brett.
Another fine Howler story, my friend.
:) e

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
    Seems I prefer to write in First Person. Glad you enjoyed this little tale about nightmares. They really are not much fun. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from sibhus
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Ha, ha, good story, Brett. A very well written piece that explains so well all the things that go bump in the night. The hiding under the covers to ward off the evils of the night, which won't do any good, was great. That's usually the first thing kids do when the get scared. Good stuff there, Brett.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
    Glad you enjoyed this little tale about nightmares. They really are not much fun. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Leineco
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LOL - I'm certainly glad I am reading this with my morning tea and not my nightcap!!!

It's a sneaky piece of writing ;-) I started out bemused at the jaunty tone and seemingly humorous monologue...but the further along I read, the more I began to feel "something" sort of crawling under my skin! By the time I got to the end......my happy face had slipped.

Well done :-)

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 27-Sep-2015
    That is what nightmares will do to you every time. Glad you enjoyed this little tale about them. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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Master of scariness. You live inside everyone's mind. Terrorizing with every thought we might have. Try as hard as you can, my thoughts are mostly beautiful and full of fun. I clean all the dark corners out everyday where you may hide.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
    Nightmares come in many forms. Everybody eventually has them. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
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This was a good read. I am not usually one to read horror or thriller stories, but said this morning, I want to read this one. Blessings for a good weekend. Patricia

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
    Glad you enjoyed this little tale about nightmares. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Jacob Collins
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A good write, Brett. You held my interest throughout your piece, I liked your use of description which I thought worked really well and I thought that your ending line was a clever way to end it. Thanks for sharing...Jacob

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 Comment Written 26-Sep-2015


reply by the author on 26-Sep-2015
    Glad you enjoyed this little tale. Your comments and support appreciated.