The Gardens at Weatherbury
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Comment from Bill Schott
This is utterly charming and filled with antics and funny dialogue. I could imagine my granddaughter having fun either reading or listening to this garden story.
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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This is utterly charming and filled with antics and funny dialogue. I could imagine my granddaughter having fun either reading or listening to this garden story.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Oh, Bill, THANK YOU SO MUCH!! This is such a wonderful surprise this morning and a wonderful way to start the week - Wow!! ;) Glad you enjoyed the little guys ... they'll definitely be a handful!! ;) Take care of you out there! ;) Yvette
P.S. Sorry for the delay - was one of those 'disorganized' weekends - lol!! ;) :)
Comment from CrystieCookie999
The imps sound quite a lot like young children. They can't be all bad, though, if they like blueberries, ha. Quite the image with their extra arms. Thanks for posting something definitely unusual from any other portrayal.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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The imps sound quite a lot like young children. They can't be all bad, though, if they like blueberries, ha. Quite the image with their extra arms. Thanks for posting something definitely unusual from any other portrayal.
Comment Written 14-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Got lots of unusual over here, my lady, especially now that summer is here! ;) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed -- hoping to get this wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care, Crystie! ;) Yvette
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Such a fun story to read. It's been a long while, but coming back to it is like coming back to, well, to a beautiful garden. And Jerry's performance was rather amusingly over the top.
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Such a fun story to read. It's been a long while, but coming back to it is like coming back to, well, to a beautiful garden. And Jerry's performance was rather amusingly over the top.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 15-May-2020
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Yes, that's Jerry: over-the-top! ;) Thanx for dropping in for an update on the garden shed... I'm hoping to get this wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I was shocked to read Jerry, simply fell over and died... thank goodness he is okay. Shot was a muddy mess...I can almost see them covered in honey. My grandson would love this story if it had pictures. He is only 3 years old. Well done, Yvette, a very exciting chapter.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I was shocked to read Jerry, simply fell over and died... thank goodness he is okay. Shot was a muddy mess...I can almost see them covered in honey. My grandson would love this story if it had pictures. He is only 3 years old. Well done, Yvette, a very exciting chapter.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I remember reading to my boys when they were even younger than that -- love to watch those 'wheels turning' in those little minds as they absorb every word!! ;) :) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed, Gypsy -- I'm hoping to get this one wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from w.j.debi
I love this story. I hope now that you're finished with school we will see chapters more often. These characters are delightful, and your descriptions create such vivid images. I can imagine those imps all covered in honey and mud. It laughed out loud when the first two imps wanted Archie to get them all wet too.
I look forward to the next installment.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I love this story. I hope now that you're finished with school we will see chapters more often. These characters are delightful, and your descriptions create such vivid images. I can imagine those imps all covered in honey and mud. It laughed out loud when the first two imps wanted Archie to get them all wet too.
I look forward to the next installment.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanx so much, W.J., for those awesome stars, my lady, and YES!! I certainly plan to get my imagination (and my typing fingers) back into high gear now that 'the final school quarter from hell' (lol!) is finished finally - ugh!! ;) :) And I do believe that Archie's a good 'imp tamer', don't you think? ;) :) lol! ;) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed -- I am hoping to get this wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Lucy de Welles
I'm adding more here :)
Do you think that something should be done with "the pink abomination"? Doesn't it need to be italicized or something? Capitalized? something, because it is referring to Archie in particular. it's calling him a name...I don't know exactly, but it gets lost in the sentence when it should stand out...
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This is so interesting and well written. How do you do it? The kids will love it! Anyone will love it. The writing is wonderful for teaching the kids good punctuating, grammar, rhythm and flow, sentence structure, just by listening. It's better read to them since the elements would stick better that way. Like learning cadence. I love the way the appearances of the characters is revealed as the story is unfolding. Love the activity and expressions of the characters.
Nothing to improve. Except maybe, "their performance" to "this performance. Strong I think. More punchy. Sometimes pronouns are hazy.
Thank you so much for the pleasurable read. Look forward to reading the rest!
Lucy
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I'm adding more here :)
Do you think that something should be done with "the pink abomination"? Doesn't it need to be italicized or something? Capitalized? something, because it is referring to Archie in particular. it's calling him a name...I don't know exactly, but it gets lost in the sentence when it should stand out...
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This is so interesting and well written. How do you do it? The kids will love it! Anyone will love it. The writing is wonderful for teaching the kids good punctuating, grammar, rhythm and flow, sentence structure, just by listening. It's better read to them since the elements would stick better that way. Like learning cadence. I love the way the appearances of the characters is revealed as the story is unfolding. Love the activity and expressions of the characters.
Nothing to improve. Except maybe, "their performance" to "this performance. Strong I think. More punchy. Sometimes pronouns are hazy.
Thank you so much for the pleasurable read. Look forward to reading the rest!
Lucy
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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I remember my teachers reading to us all through grade school -- was usually at 'nap' or 'rest' time... ;) :) And I read to my boys from the time they could sit on my lap (less than a year!)! ;) Thanx for your review on this chapter, Lucy -- would love to see you get caught up and follow along with the fun this summer! ;) :) I am hoping to get this one wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Shirley McLain
What a cute picture you paint in my head with your words. I could easily see the mischief going on and the knome settling it with water. You did an excellent job with no errors that I picked up on. Have a great day. Shirley
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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What a cute picture you paint in my head with your words. I could easily see the mischief going on and the knome settling it with water. You did an excellent job with no errors that I picked up on. Have a great day. Shirley
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Oh, I'm so glad you enjoyed these little guys, Shirley! ;) And that Archie's a good 'imp tamer', don't you think? LOL! ;) :) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed, my lady -- hoping to get this one wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from aryr
This was a great continuation chapter, Yvette. I didn't think it was too long and I am so glad you didn't disrupt Jerry's performance. It was rather quick thinking on Archie's part to not only do the blueberry trick but also the water splash. Very well done, very much enjoyed, be safe, be well.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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This was a great continuation chapter, Yvette. I didn't think it was too long and I am so glad you didn't disrupt Jerry's performance. It was rather quick thinking on Archie's part to not only do the blueberry trick but also the water splash. Very well done, very much enjoyed, be safe, be well.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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LOL!! ;) Archie's a good 'imp tamer', don't you think? ;) :) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed, Alie -- hoping to get this wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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Ahaaa I have learned it will finish when it is done and not before, lol. You are so welcome.
Comment from poetwatch
Berrys of power, Yvette? :) I like those feisty little imps they remind me of two children not getting any candy. :) Good to see you're in writing mode. Hope to read many more chapters (At least a few). Maybe a different short line like Maggie? :) I know it's harder because of all the characters and magic. It's a book your are writing there for us wanderers in the fantasy realm. Thank you for sharing this pre-teen story. Take care of yourself.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Berrys of power, Yvette? :) I like those feisty little imps they remind me of two children not getting any candy. :) Good to see you're in writing mode. Hope to read many more chapters (At least a few). Maybe a different short line like Maggie? :) I know it's harder because of all the characters and magic. It's a book your are writing there for us wanderers in the fantasy realm. Thank you for sharing this pre-teen story. Take care of yourself.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Oh, Maggie's next on the agenda.... look for that chapter soon. Just getting my imagination up and running after finishing off that awful end to the school year -- let's just say they simply don't pay us enough for the trouble that was - lol!! ;) :) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed, Jose -- hoping to get this one wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from robyn corum
Yvette,
Utterly deeeee-light-ful. Yep, yep, yep. I'd give you about ten stars if I could. The description of the actions of these characters was wonderful. I love your crazy imagination and it just tells me alllll over again that I think we will get along FAMOUSLY!
Or kill each other.
But it will certainly NOT be boring, I am sure. hehehe
Only one tiny note for your consideration - and I offer it humbly to your majesty --
--> I think, but it was hard to understand him. But he was turning into a real, muddy mess.
--> two 'buts' really close together?
Loved it. When I clicked on your name, Iwas thinking 'where are the stories???' So, YAY! Thanks!
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Yvette,
Utterly deeeee-light-ful. Yep, yep, yep. I'd give you about ten stars if I could. The description of the actions of these characters was wonderful. I love your crazy imagination and it just tells me alllll over again that I think we will get along FAMOUSLY!
Or kill each other.
But it will certainly NOT be boring, I am sure. hehehe
Only one tiny note for your consideration - and I offer it humbly to your majesty --
--> I think, but it was hard to understand him. But he was turning into a real, muddy mess.
--> two 'buts' really close together?
Loved it. When I clicked on your name, Iwas thinking 'where are the stories???' So, YAY! Thanks!
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Yep, hooray for the summertime! :) ;) And hooray for those stars, my lady -- it really felt good to get the imagination working again in the world of fantasy instead of simply 'making it through' the end of the school year - ugh! :) And thanx for that catch there -- it has been handled (although not with honey spray, I'm afraid - lol!) :)
So far as our meeting, I'm going for the 'circling each other for while' and then 'deciding to team up against the rest of the world' LOL! (wink, wink!) ;) :) Oh, and then? Look out world!! ;) :)
I am really looking forward to getting back to my writing and not just the quick poems... won't pass those up, I just really like to see these characters that live in my head brought to the page so that others can enjoy them too (hopefully!) ;) :) Thanx so much for keeping up with the shed (others may be following soon!) -- hoping to get this one wrapped up before summer's end... but we'll see what lies ahead (ugh)!! ;) Take care and have a wonderful day over there! ;) Yvette
