You Will See
This is about the truth being finally revealed.43 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
A well written poem, the sequence of rhyming couplets. Loved the message, imagery, visuals and presentation.
Yes, there are a lot of false Christians out there, you brought it out well. I hate hypocrisy in any manner, but when it comes to religion, it is appalling.
Thank you very much for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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A well written poem, the sequence of rhyming couplets. Loved the message, imagery, visuals and presentation.
Yes, there are a lot of false Christians out there, you brought it out well. I hate hypocrisy in any manner, but when it comes to religion, it is appalling.
Thank you very much for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 27-Sep-2021
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Your wonderful comments provide encouragement and support that warms my heart.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"You Will See", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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"You Will See", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Duchess, my Duchess. You are the absolute best. As long as you are my friend, I will never lack for support, kindness and friendship. Luv you so much.
Comment from Boogienights
This poem is very well written and I like the way it rhymes. I can't speak too much on the subject matter as I haven't dealt with any false Christians. But your poem is certainly food for thought. Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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This poem is very well written and I like the way it rhymes. I can't speak too much on the subject matter as I haven't dealt with any false Christians. But your poem is certainly food for thought. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you so much for your great review comments.
Comment from Zhen Xuan Liu
I love this poem! It is invigorating to see a poem discussing the importance of Christian faith and the power of God. You managed to do that very well through the simple yet meaningful words you used. Good job and I am excited to read more of your poems!
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I love this poem! It is invigorating to see a poem discussing the importance of Christian faith and the power of God. You managed to do that very well through the simple yet meaningful words you used. Good job and I am excited to read more of your poems!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Welcome my brother. I hope that you will enjoy reading my humble efforts. I thank you for your kind review comments.
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No problem!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We are seeing a lot of false Christians today as they are being exposed. It's sad. Our God is an awesome God. He's kind, just and loving, but He is also a jealous God. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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We are seeing a lot of false Christians today as they are being exposed. It's sad. Our God is an awesome God. He's kind, just and loving, but He is also a jealous God. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Yes, as we are deep into the end times, more and more bible prophecy will be coming to pass, It will be interesting to see how many people will ignore or not recognize the signs. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Patty Palmer
This is a very well-written poem about our Lord. As you say, one day all of those who claim to be Christian will be found out. They think they have us fooled, but we are not. It's easy to see. Christians don't go out of their way to ruin an entire country at lightning speed. They don't leave their people behind enemy lines allowing them to be tortured and killed. They don't single-handedly let sick people into our country without checking them out. He is putting our whole world at risk. And he is not the only one.
Patty
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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This is a very well-written poem about our Lord. As you say, one day all of those who claim to be Christian will be found out. They think they have us fooled, but we are not. It's easy to see. Christians don't go out of their way to ruin an entire country at lightning speed. They don't leave their people behind enemy lines allowing them to be tortured and killed. They don't single-handedly let sick people into our country without checking them out. He is putting our whole world at risk. And he is not the only one.
Patty
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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It is written, the first shall be last, rough places will be made smooth. The sick will be made well, and oh yes, the guilty will pay for their misdeeds. Thank you so much for your supportive review comments.
Comment from amahra
I loved the entire poem, but the below lines are my favorite. It's my favorite because in times when I feel overwhelmed by the things of the world, the one thing that made me smile and snap out of it was belonging to God's family. Thank you for a delightful poem.
I am delighted to have joined that happy crowd
My entry into his family was allowed.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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I loved the entire poem, but the below lines are my favorite. It's my favorite because in times when I feel overwhelmed by the things of the world, the one thing that made me smile and snap out of it was belonging to God's family. Thank you for a delightful poem.
I am delighted to have joined that happy crowd
My entry into his family was allowed.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you. I am so pleased that you liked the poem.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Nolan, Good morning sweet guy....false believers
can play any roles they want...but God can see
right through them...no words they in lies will He not see...
I love your poem my sweet friend...great rhythm and rhyme...
very well written you...and your picture....beautiful...
love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Hi Nolan, Good morning sweet guy....false believers
can play any roles they want...but God can see
right through them...no words they in lies will He not see...
I love your poem my sweet friend...great rhythm and rhyme...
very well written you...and your picture....beautiful...
love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thanks friend. I am blessed to have friends like you, I am inspired, encouraged, and uplifted by your wonderful support.
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I am honored Nolan to have you as my friend sweet guy...and you are a very talented writer...and always so welcome...love xxoo
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AW, you got me smiling from ear to ear. :))
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then I am smiling as well...have a wonderful day...love xxoo
Comment from Pantygynt
With these rhyming couplets it would be a mistake to go looking for a metrical rhythm. Once again you are living well inside your comfort zone. Read this as if you were reciting a rap, and immediately it's rhythm stands out.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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With these rhyming couplets it would be a mistake to go looking for a metrical rhythm. Once again you are living well inside your comfort zone. Read this as if you were reciting a rap, and immediately it's rhythm stands out.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you. Wonderful to hear from you. Believe me it is always a pleasure.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a lovely poem of your faith in God and His Son Jesus, Nomi, and written in delightful rhyming couplets. They are so smoothe making it a joy to read. Your message is one that many should heed, there are many people I know who will have a shock when they are summoned before God. Saying you are Christian is not the same and being one. Well done, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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That was a lovely poem of your faith in God and His Son Jesus, Nomi, and written in delightful rhyming couplets. They are so smoothe making it a joy to read. Your message is one that many should heed, there are many people I know who will have a shock when they are summoned before God. Saying you are Christian is not the same and being one. Well done, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Sandra, your fine words really touch my heart and help me to resolve to not hesitate to speak of my faith and my beliefs in future.
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Absolutely! The more you share, the more people will listen. You have a lovely, kind face, my friend, and a heart that goes with it. xx
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Thank you once again.
