The Gardens at Weatherbury
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Hi Archie and crew welcome back :) we missed you:) and here comes Jerry complaining of hunger and being confined in a drawer. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Hi Archie and crew welcome back :) we missed you:) and here comes Jerry complaining of hunger and being confined in a drawer. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Iza - was good to get back to having fun out in the shed with the gang... can't wait to get started working outside - lol!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from poetwatch
Yvette, you like to dip your pen in fantasy. :) These characters are believable. Yet, this chapter is just a tad smaller then the others. Archibald is mean poor imps all they wanted was something to eat. Good story. Keep it up and I'll keep reading. :)
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Yvette, you like to dip your pen in fantasy. :) These characters are believable. Yet, this chapter is just a tad smaller then the others. Archibald is mean poor imps all they wanted was something to eat. Good story. Keep it up and I'll keep reading. :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Jose - was good to get back to having fun out in the shed with the gang... can't wait to get started working outside - lol!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
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I still miss Maggie. ;)
Comment from IndefinitelySmallx
Content aside (which is very good both structurally and substantively) I want to commend you on the very good physical structure of this. I love the colored fonts. Even on its face, without diving in, this is already a huge help with following the different parts of this page! I know this may not be the review you were looking for, but just so you know--it's helpful!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Content aside (which is very good both structurally and substantively) I want to commend you on the very good physical structure of this. I love the colored fonts. Even on its face, without diving in, this is already a huge help with following the different parts of this page! I know this may not be the review you were looking for, but just so you know--it's helpful!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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I am so very glad that my OCD-ness resonated with you - lol! ;) That's the 'mathematical' part of my brain at play on the formatting, I suppose. :) ;) And thanx so much for your review, sir - was good to hear from you in the Garden Shed today and would love for you to drop by more often... consider this an open invitation! ;) Take care out there! ;) Yvette
Comment from Bill Schott
So glad to be back in the garden. I know my granddaughter, Emily will really enjoy this series. She is reading now and thi nwill be right up her alley.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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So glad to be back in the garden. I know my granddaughter, Emily will really enjoy this series. She is reading now and thi nwill be right up her alley.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Hooray!! ;) Another reason for me to get my pen back in gear!! ;) Thanx so much for your review, Bill - really was good to get back to having fun out in the shed with the gang... can't wait to get started working outside - lol!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for returning us to the garden! I wonder if your own garden was the inspiration for all these magical creatures. I guess that map is something only the imps can get? It's good they are willing to work for blueberries!
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thank you for returning us to the garden! I wonder if your own garden was the inspiration for all these magical creatures. I guess that map is something only the imps can get? It's good they are willing to work for blueberries!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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We'll have to see.... :) Thanx so much for your review, Helen - was good to get back to having fun out in the shed with the gang... can't wait to get started working outside - lol!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Whit and whimsy and a delightful cast of characters. Dialog flows naturally and pacing is brisk--I can see how this series would capture and hold interest of attention-deprived pre-teens. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Whit and whimsy and a delightful cast of characters. Dialog flows naturally and pacing is brisk--I can see how this series would capture and hold interest of attention-deprived pre-teens. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Liz - was good to get back to having fun out in the shed with the gang... can't wait to get started working outside - lol!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
This is just delightful, dear Yvette and during a hurricane. (Dear me, I was so concerned for all of Alabama. I'm so relieved to see the post.) Well written as always and in the banter I've come to love.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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This is just delightful, dear Yvette and during a hurricane. (Dear me, I was so concerned for all of Alabama. I'm so relieved to see the post.) Well written as always and in the banter I've come to love.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Yeah, we're good this far North... just a HORRIBLE migraine the day she 'came ashore' with the barometric pressure drop, but no real weather here to speak of... ;) :) :) Thanx for asking!! ;)
And thanx so much for your review, my lady - was good to get back to having fun out in the shed with the gang... can't wait to get started working outside - lol!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from Shirley McLain
A great chapter and I really would have liked more to read, but in another way I like the shortness of it. I guess I can't have it both ways. You did a great job. Shirley
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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A great chapter and I really would have liked more to read, but in another way I like the shortness of it. I guess I can't have it both ways. You did a great job. Shirley
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Comment Written 16-Sep-2020
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2020
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Thanx so much for your review, Shirley - was good to get back to having fun out in the shed with the gang... can't wait to get started working outside - lol!! ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
