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Lunch box memories.

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Comment from patcelaw
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Haven't remember my first reader in school was the run run run run run. It was a fun looking. I was so excited about learning to read. Have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Thank you Patricia, you are very kind.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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Oh my goodness! I had the same sandwich for lunch and the same Dick and Jane book. My mother even purchased a book from the school so she could help me practice reading at home. She made me read it so many times I had most of it memorized. Do you remember their dog Spot? Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    I do remember Spot. I think we may have had a dog that we named spot when I was a child. Or maybe it was a cat, the mind is the first thing to go LOL.
Comment from kahpot
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Love the images your words brought back, though not sure who Dick and Jane maybe, I remember my lunches and the little box they came in, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Thank you so very much.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
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DonandVicki,

You two always write cute and beautiful poetry. I like this 5-7-5 poem and the picture chose is adorable and compliments this poem.

Well done and good luck in your contest

Cecilia

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Thank you so very much, Cecilia for your, always, kind reviews.
reply by Cecilia A Heiskary on 27-Nov-2024
    DonandVicki,

    You guys are good together. I love to give positive reviews when warrented.

    Cecilia
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hey Don.
I had a lot of baloney sandwiches for lunch when I was a kid. I remember Dick, Jane, and even Spot. This all brings back memories of many, many years ago when I wasn't worried about anything. Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much Robert, a very generous review.
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 27-Nov-2024
    You're welcome, Don.
    Robert
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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I love this illustration, Don, which takes me back to your childhood era. I didn't have a lunchbox though or a baloney sandwich but you've certainly captured some sweet memories. And my favourite line is your last which adds that fun in the finale. Well done and good luck! Debbie

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 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Thank you so much Debbie, I still eat baloney sandwich but the are called Waldo's now.
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You are going way back with Dick and Jane,
as well as lunchboxes.
-You do a good job of capturing the
nature of it when some of us were
in school at that time.
-What could be better than a sandwich,
your lunchbox, and adventures with Dick and Jane.
-Well done. Thanks for the memory, and
good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 27-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2024
    Thsank you so very much Pam.
reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Nov-2024
    You are very welcome.