Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet,

you have won your first vote!

I think you offer good advice towards creating a good relationship with others.

If I followed just half of your suggestions, I would be a happier and surely be a better person.

A solid entry.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

Thanks!

reply by tempeste on 19-Jun-2022

You are welcome

Hope you are enjoying your Sunday.

Ciao!

Comment from GTG345

Excellent

This is a great poem, a very wise word to choose. With the 7th line starting with E I feel like some word is missing between "patience" and "help". Try messing around with it to add a word like "can" or "will" there.

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 19-Jun-2022

I have the same syllables!

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

Hi mystery writer, your poem expresses a true sentiment. The advice is good for human relations. Well expressed and written. Good luck in the contest. ~Mel~

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Thanks!

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Have you read my current contest entries?

Pookietoo

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

Wow ! Very well written. Beautiful message too. I wish we could all follow it. You have done a wonderful job. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2022

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Yes, I should get six stars.

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Have you read my other recent poems?

reply by Bridge on 16-Jun-2022

No I'm afraid I haven't....though I can't be sure

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Please do.

reply by Bridge on 16-Jun-2022

I will after the contest. At present I'm not aware of your identity because of the ' Blind entry' condition.
With regards

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

Pookietoo

reply by Bridge on 16-Jun-2022

Thank you

reply by the author on 16-Jun-2022

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