nemesis
my name6 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Gives the reader that sense of wanting to know more but questioning whether that would be a good idea... well done. I think you may want to eliminate the rogue 'i' at the beginning of your first line... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
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Gives the reader that sense of wanting to know more but questioning whether that would be a good idea... well done. I think you may want to eliminate the rogue 'i' at the beginning of your first line... Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2025
Comment from w.j.debi
Perfect syllable count and a well developed theme. You create a mysterious and spooky mood with your three lines. The artwork supports and enhances the theme.
Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Perfect syllable count and a well developed theme. You create a mysterious and spooky mood with your three lines. The artwork supports and enhances the theme.
Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
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Thank you for you five star review of my three line poem Nemesis. It surprises me how much one can convey in seventeen syllables, bloop
Comment from thoughtgame2
Just to be able to come up with these three lines, shows me that there is a writer in you...that has been crying to get out. Very nicely illustrated also. Keep up the good work we as poets have been born to do. Thank you very much for sharing, and I look forward for much more.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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Just to be able to come up with these three lines, shows me that there is a writer in you...that has been crying to get out. Very nicely illustrated also. Keep up the good work we as poets have been born to do. Thank you very much for sharing, and I look forward for much more.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2023
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dear friend, yes you're right, and she's out of the barbed wire and past the barred door at last. beyond is the yellow brick road she's been seeking for the greater part of her existence and once she sets foot on it- - WHAMMO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! there's a whole new world out there, thank you for your encouraging remarks. nothing like a pat on the head. cheers Cass
Comment from lyenochka
I don't know if this is a real entity with the name of "Nemesis" but there are people around the world who think other people are their enemies and the speak the names all the time on the internet. But I wish for peace!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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I don't know if this is a real entity with the name of "Nemesis" but there are people around the world who think other people are their enemies and the speak the names all the time on the internet. But I wish for peace!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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dear friend thank you for reviewing Nemesis
yes there are people who live their lives filled with hate. We need sweet, gentle folk (like you)
to lessen the difference/ bloop
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Thank you, Cass! You and I are the Lord's children and that is where we get our gentleness - from the Lord. 💞💖
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Awesome! Love it! Impactful, dramatic, strong, a real statement! Tough to do in so small a space!
I like your picture choice too it's quite the package your picture choice your word selection your subject matter all of these things create a Great submission for this contest for which you have followed all the contest rules great work and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Awesome! Love it! Impactful, dramatic, strong, a real statement! Tough to do in so small a space!
I like your picture choice too it's quite the package your picture choice your word selection your subject matter all of these things create a Great submission for this contest for which you have followed all the contest rules great work and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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dear friend thank you for reviewing Nemesis,
your assessment is most generous and warmly appreciated, bloop
Comment from Brandon Clark
Excellent! You crafted a striking poem and adhered to the prompt in do so. As and Environmental Scientist I appreciate your topic and very much agree with the sentiment! Perfect words and a great message!
I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Brandon
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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Excellent! You crafted a striking poem and adhered to the prompt in do so. As and Environmental Scientist I appreciate your topic and very much agree with the sentiment! Perfect words and a great message!
I wish you the best of luck in the contest!
Brandon
Comment Written 26-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2023
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thank you for your review of Nemesis,The art work was just an idle thought, I'm surprised at the impact it has, bloop
