Comment from
Nicki Nance
This is a lovely poem that truly goes into the depths of her relationship with her former self. It israre to find a dialogue with the inner child that includes reaching out spiritually, even though a spiritual crisis is ofenthe cause of a hole in the soul. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
Thank you.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from
Dolly'sPoems
We all hold a certain amount of innocence and vulnerability within and have fear of what is going on in the world and I enjoyed hearing these voices speak here Shirley, a well written and rhymed poem with a great flow, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2023
Thanks so much Dolly.
I appreciate you.
Blessings
Shirley