Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is lovely! The image of sunbeams gliding through clouds and streaking through a window feels so warm. It feels like you are saying to take a moment to enjoy the beauty around us. Your words create such a peaceful feeling. Thanks for sharing this slice of sunshine!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

hi Michael, thank you for your comments and review. I felt as though I never wanted to come back down to the ground! Dove

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

I absolutely love looking out the window of a plane and seeing the clouds, it really is magical.
Your poem is beautiful and captured the scene perfectly.
Good luck with the contest!.
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 04-Nov-2024

Hi NIcki, thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I prefer to remain on the ground and enjoy the glorious sun, but I do love imagining how much more beautiful it must have been being so close to it. Thank you for sharing your experience with us.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2024

Hi Carol, thank you for your comments and review. Dove

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am glad you enjoyed being close to the sun on your flight back home from Italy and how lovely that you enjoyed a break in Europe. A fine poem as a tribute to your trip, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2024

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reply by the author on 23-Oct-2024

Hi Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, donna x