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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?

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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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That is so nice that Noah went to John to ask for permission to marry Sami. I'm sure Sami will accept happily! :)) That Marc was a bit of an @?#! wasn't he? But he was soon put in his place by Noah and Sami. It's nice that it's all over now. Just planning the wedding?? :)) Very well done, my friend.
I've been waiting to read your chapter, because I have big problems seeing now, I went to the opticians on Monday and they told me I have very thick cataract in my left eye and they need to see behind my right eye because although I have a cataract in that eye, it's not so thick, but they think there is a different problem there. After all the stuff they put in my eyes, I'm only now being able to see enough to read properly. Warmest hugs, my friend. Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 21-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 21-Nov-2024
    I'm sorry to hear about your cataract problem. I will pray about your eyesight. Thank you for understanding.
Comment from Ulla
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Aw, so it's all coming out in the open now, Barbara. The only one who doesn't know Noah will ask her to marrying him, is Sami. I just hope Marc will not be too much of a problem. Hugs, Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Noah can handle Marc, and Sami told him off. Noah needs to work out issues with his job. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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"Cat's out of the bag," as the saying goes. Now comes all the explaining and answering questions for Noah. And for his sake, I hope he has all the right answers. But of course he will, Barbara writing them. :-)
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Noah still has issues with his work to iron out. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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Another exquisite addition. I love the Mark butthead jumping in. I've known a few men just like him.

Good detail and dialogue. I feel like this story is wrapping up nicely!!!
Good job!

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    I know some like him myself. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Douglas Goff on 20-Nov-2024
    Where is Kevin?
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Barbara,
I'm glad that they're out of the cabin and hopefully on the way to a more normal life. Her ex boyfriend is sure a piece of work. I imagine he might throw a few wrinkles in the mix before it's all over. Well done gal.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 20-Nov-2024
    Noah can handle him, and Sami stood up to him. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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Very nice post, Barb. We are now getting around to the important stuff. I had forgotten about Marc. I'm sure that Noah will have to deal with him before long.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the kind review. I'm tying up the loose ends.
Comment from Teri7
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Now this is truly my kind of six-star chapters I love to read!!! I can't wait until Noah actually proposes to Sami! You used great descriptive words and very good imagery with your words. Thank you for making my day! love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the wonderful encouragement.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I like that he went old school and asked her father for permission. That's a sign of a stand up guy. Marc showing up was a surprise. He certainly is a self assured guy. Great chapter here. Gretchen

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    If you remember Sami discussing him earlier, he had told her women at the country club didn't do sports. LOl Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from patcelaw
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This was very nicely written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. It flows very well when it is read loud and I also admire sentence structure, and the paragraphing that you have used. I also enjoy the fact that you use good punctuation. Patricia.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 19-Nov-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jacob1395
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That was intense when Sami's former boyfriend, Marc turned up, I felt he was being very foolish in the way how he was speaking to her and that he really should just accept that Sami had moved on from him. Another excellent chapter, Barbara, I enjoyed reading it.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2024


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2024
    Marc is only concerned about himself. Thank you for the kind review.