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Willing Hearts

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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?

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Comment from Lindsey Russell
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This is such a sweet love story, but every love story much have bumps in the road. Good luck with the rest of this story. Happy writing and Merry Christmas!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from T B Botts
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Hi Barbara,
I'm not sure how this is going to work between Sami and Noah if she assumes a worse case scenario every time something happens that she doesn't understand. I'm afraid I couldn't handle that. Better to put an end to the relationship before they get married.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
    LOL Sami is high maintenance, but I have a feeling Noah can handle her. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from GWHARGIS
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This was very nervewrecking when Sami saw Noah with the other woman. I probably would have done the same as she did. We let our imaginations get the better of us sometimes, especially when it comes to the opposite sex. Another wonderful chapter. Gretchen

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2024
    Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from royowen
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I love the goings on between Sami and Noah, trust is a moot thing, it seems to be really difficult to develop that trusting relationship that needs to develop, it's something that requires time, my wife and I have been together for a long time, but the near-absolute trust took awhile, beautifully written Barbara, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    So true and once trust is lost, it's almost impossible to get it back again. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by royowen on 10-Dec-2024
    That's true
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Barbara, we must be getting to end of this romantic saga. Sami is forever misunderstanding things and Noah seems to be at the root of it all. I do hope they find a solution soon. Great chapter. Ulla. xxx

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    I have six posts left. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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That picture of Noah is very intense. LoL

I enjoyed the chapter. We must be getting close to the proposal.

I'm a jealous person too. I can understand how Sami felt. But I'm sure Noah would not cheat on her.

Well done!

Gypsy

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    Noah would never cheat on her. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Douglas Goff
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I don't remember Amber Mills from earlier and she isn't in your character list.

The real problem with this chapter is that I had not been thinking about pulled pork and now it is the only thing I can think about.

Thank you, Barbara.
Great read.
D.

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    Amber Mills was the person Sami read the letters about in the puzzle box. The one who's finance died during Viet Nam. A review of her story will come up Sunday. Thank you for the kind review. I made pulled port the other day.
Comment from Sanku
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Conflicts are of every story , they make things happen .Sami misunderstood and she soon realised her mistake . I like that they respect each other deeply .

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
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This was a really great chapter and that was a picture of a hunk! lol You used great descriptive words and great dialogue. I am glad Sami and Noah made up! That guy looked like he could be Noah. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 10-Dec-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
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Still clipping along pretty good. I thought it was dangerous going over to his apartment. He should not answer the door half dressed. I wouldn't have left, I would have demanded and immediate answer. But, I am far meaner. :-)

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 09-Dec-2024
    He was standing in the hallway. Bob and Jose dropped her off and saw Noah's light and his shadow in the apartment. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 10-Dec-2024
    :-)